Re: [mpls] [MIB-DOCTORS] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt

Mach,

Comments below (3 of them).

Thanks,
  -Joan

smilint compiler output:
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While processing your request the following errors and/or warnings have been
found:

mibs/MPLS-OAM-ID-STD-MIB.my:22: [4] {module-identity-registration} warning:
uncontrolled MODULE-IDENTITY registration
mibs/MPLS-OAM-ID-STD-MIB.my:5: [5] {import-unused} warning: identifier
`zeroDotZero' imported from module `SNMPv2-SMI' is never used
mibs/MPLS-OAM-ID-STD-MIB.my:10: [5] {import-unused} warning: identifier
`TEXTUAL-CONVENTION' imported from module `SNMPv2-TC' is never used

Additional descriptions of some error/warning messages:

Warning:     module-identity-registration (level 4)
Message:     uncontrolled MODULE-IDENTITY registration
Description: The identities of IETF MIB modules should be registered below
             mib-2, transmission, or snmpModules so that the registration
             space can be controlled by IANA.

1)   Would like to see the Level 5 warnings fixed because that is  a minor
edit.   I am okay with the level 4 warning because most of the MPLS MIBs are
registered under mplsStdMIB branch.  

Compliance Statement of the MIB
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2) Compliance (mentioned this before)

There is no read-only compliance. Has it been made clear
to the WGs (MPLS and PWE3) that SNMP sets  will need to
be supported in order to be compliant with the MIB?

Section 8. Security Section
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3) Please fix the incomplete sentence which is: 
"These are the tables and objects and their sensitivity/vulnerability: "

> -----Original Message-----
> From: MIB-DOCTORS [mailto:mib-doctors-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
> Joan Cucchiara
> Sent: Friday, December 12, 2014 1:08 PM
> To: 'Mach Chen'
> Cc: mib-doctors@ietf.org; mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org; draft-ietf-mpls-tp-
> oam-id-mib@tools.ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [MIB-DOCTORS] [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-
> mib-06.txt
> 
> Mach,
> 
> I will take a look over the weekend.    Should be compiled by smilint too
I
> think, but I can look into doing that.
> 
> Thanks,
>   -Joan
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Mach Chen [mailto:mach.chen@huawei.com]
> > Sent: Tuesday, December 09, 2014 10:21 PM
> > To: Joan Cucchiara
> > Cc: mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org;
> draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib@tools.ietf.org;
> > mib-doctors@ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org
> > Subject: RE: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt
> >
> > Thanks Joan,
> >
> > I have tried OiDViEW MIB Complier and it passed the check.
> >
> > Best regards,
> > Mach
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Joan Cucchiara [mailto:jcucchiara@mindspring.com]
> > > Sent: Tuesday, December 09, 2014 11:23 PM
> > > To: Mach Chen
> > > Cc: mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org;
> > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib@tools.ietf.org;
> > > mib-doctors@ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org
> > > Subject: RE: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt
> > >
> > > Mach,
> > >
> > > I'll take a look soon.  Can you tell me what MIB compilers this has
> > > been compiled with?
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > >  -Joan
> > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: Mach Chen [mailto:mach.chen@huawei.com]
> > > > Sent: Monday, December 08, 2014 10:27 PM
> > > > To: jcucchiara@mindspring.com
> > > > Cc: mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org;
> > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib@tools.ietf.org;
> > > > mib-doctors@ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org
> > > > Subject: FW: [mpls] I-D Action:
> > > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt
> > > >
> > > > Hi Joan,
> > > >
> > > > The authors uploaded a revision to address the Shepherd's comments.
> > > > I have reviewed this version and am OK with it.
> > > >
> > > > Would you please take a look at the latest version of this document?
> > > > If
> > > you
> > > > are OK with it, we can move it forward.
> > > >
> > > > Thanks,
> > > > Mach
> > > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: mpls [mailto:mpls-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of internet-
> > > > drafts@ietf.org
> > > > Sent: Thursday, December 04, 2014 8:49 AM
> > > > To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> > > > Cc: mpls@ietf.org
> > > > Subject: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > > directories.
> > > >  This draft is a work item of the Multiprotocol Label Switching
> > > > Working
> > > Group
> > > > of the IETF.
> > > >
> > > >         Title           : MPLS-TP Operations, Administration, and
> > > Management
> > > > (OAM) Identifiers Management Information Base (MIB)
> > > >         Authors         : Sam Aldrin
> > > >                           Venkatesan Mahalingam
> > > >                           Kannan KV Sampath
> > > >                           Thomas D. Nadeau
> > > > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt
> > > > 	Pages           : 27
> > > > 	Date            : 2014-12-03
> > > >
> > > > Abstract:
> > > >    This memo defines a portion of the Management Information Base
> > (MIB)
> > > >    for use with network management protocols in the Internet
> > community.
> > > >    In particular, it describes Operations, Administration, and
> > > >    Management (OAM) identifiers related managed objects for
> > > >    Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) and MPLS based Transport
> Profile
> > > >    (TP).
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib/
> > > >
> > > > There's also a htmlized version available at:
> > > > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06
> > > >
> > > > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > > > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> > > submission
> > > > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> > > >
> > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> > > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> > > >
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