Re: [mpls] [MIB-DOCTORS] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt

Hi Joan,

Many thanks for taking your time to review the document and the detailed comments!

To the Authors:

Please look at Joan's comments and address them accordingly.

Best regards,
Mach

> -----Original Message-----
> From: mpls [mailto:mpls-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Joan Cucchiara
> Sent: Monday, December 15, 2014 11:29 AM
> To: Mach Chen
> Cc: mib-doctors@ietf.org; mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org;
> draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib@tools.ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [mpls] [MIB-DOCTORS] I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt
> 
> 
> Mach,
> 
> Comments below (3 of them).
> 
> Thanks,
>   -Joan
> 
> 
> smilint compiler output:
> --------------------
> While processing your request the following errors and/or warnings have been
> found:
> 
> mibs/MPLS-OAM-ID-STD-MIB.my:22: [4] {module-identity-registration} warning:
> uncontrolled MODULE-IDENTITY registration
> mibs/MPLS-OAM-ID-STD-MIB.my:5: [5] {import-unused} warning: identifier
> `zeroDotZero' imported from module `SNMPv2-SMI' is never used
> mibs/MPLS-OAM-ID-STD-MIB.my:10: [5] {import-unused} warning: identifier
> `TEXTUAL-CONVENTION' imported from module `SNMPv2-TC' is never used
> 
> Additional descriptions of some error/warning messages:
> 
> Warning:     module-identity-registration (level 4)
> Message:     uncontrolled MODULE-IDENTITY registration
> Description: The identities of IETF MIB modules should be registered below
>              mib-2, transmission, or snmpModules so that the registration
>              space can be controlled by IANA.
> 
> 1)   Would like to see the Level 5 warnings fixed because that is  a minor
> edit.   I am okay with the level 4 warning because most of the MPLS MIBs are
> registered under mplsStdMIB branch.
> 
> 
> Compliance Statement of the MIB
> ----------------------------------------------
> 2) Compliance (mentioned this before)
> 
> There is no read-only compliance. Has it been made clear to the WGs (MPLS and
> PWE3) that SNMP sets  will need to be supported in order to be compliant with
> the MIB?
> 
> Section 8. Security Section
> ---------------------------------
> 3) Please fix the incomplete sentence which is:
> "These are the tables and objects and their sensitivity/vulnerability: "
> 
> 
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: MIB-DOCTORS [mailto:mib-doctors-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
> > Joan Cucchiara
> > Sent: Friday, December 12, 2014 1:08 PM
> > To: 'Mach Chen'
> > Cc: mib-doctors@ietf.org; mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org;
> > draft-ietf-mpls-tp- oam-id-mib@tools.ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org
> > Subject: Re: [MIB-DOCTORS] [mpls] I-D Action:
> > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id- mib-06.txt
> >
> > Mach,
> >
> > I will take a look over the weekend.    Should be compiled by smilint too
> I
> > think, but I can look into doing that.
> >
> > Thanks,
> >   -Joan
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Mach Chen [mailto:mach.chen@huawei.com]
> > > Sent: Tuesday, December 09, 2014 10:21 PM
> > > To: Joan Cucchiara
> > > Cc: mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org;
> > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib@tools.ietf.org;
> > > mib-doctors@ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org
> > > Subject: RE: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt
> > >
> > > Thanks Joan,
> > >
> > > I have tried OiDViEW MIB Complier and it passed the check.
> > >
> > > Best regards,
> > > Mach
> > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: Joan Cucchiara [mailto:jcucchiara@mindspring.com]
> > > > Sent: Tuesday, December 09, 2014 11:23 PM
> > > > To: Mach Chen
> > > > Cc: mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org;
> > > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib@tools.ietf.org;
> > > > mib-doctors@ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org
> > > > Subject: RE: [mpls] I-D Action:
> > > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt
> > > >
> > > > Mach,
> > > >
> > > > I'll take a look soon.  Can you tell me what MIB compilers this
> > > > has been compiled with?
> > > >
> > > > Thanks,
> > > >  -Joan
> > > >
> > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > From: Mach Chen [mailto:mach.chen@huawei.com]
> > > > > Sent: Monday, December 08, 2014 10:27 PM
> > > > > To: jcucchiara@mindspring.com
> > > > > Cc: mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org;
> > > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib@tools.ietf.org;
> > > > > mib-doctors@ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org
> > > > > Subject: FW: [mpls] I-D Action:
> > > > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt
> > > > >
> > > > > Hi Joan,
> > > > >
> > > > > The authors uploaded a revision to address the Shepherd's comments.
> > > > > I have reviewed this version and am OK with it.
> > > > >
> > > > > Would you please take a look at the latest version of this document?
> > > > > If
> > > > you
> > > > > are OK with it, we can move it forward.
> > > > >
> > > > > Thanks,
> > > > > Mach
> > > > >
> > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > From: mpls [mailto:mpls-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of internet-
> > > > > drafts@ietf.org
> > > > > Sent: Thursday, December 04, 2014 8:49 AM
> > > > > To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> > > > > Cc: mpls@ietf.org
> > > > > Subject: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line
> > > > > Internet-Drafts
> > > > directories.
> > > > >  This draft is a work item of the Multiprotocol Label Switching
> > > > > Working
> > > > Group
> > > > > of the IETF.
> > > > >
> > > > >         Title           : MPLS-TP Operations, Administration, and
> > > > Management
> > > > > (OAM) Identifiers Management Information Base (MIB)
> > > > >         Authors         : Sam Aldrin
> > > > >                           Venkatesan Mahalingam
> > > > >                           Kannan KV Sampath
> > > > >                           Thomas D. Nadeau
> > > > > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06.txt
> > > > > 	Pages           : 27
> > > > > 	Date            : 2014-12-03
> > > > >
> > > > > Abstract:
> > > > >    This memo defines a portion of the Management Information
> > > > > Base
> > > (MIB)
> > > > >    for use with network management protocols in the Internet
> > > community.
> > > > >    In particular, it describes Operations, Administration, and
> > > > >    Management (OAM) identifiers related managed objects for
> > > > >    Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) and MPLS based Transport
> > Profile
> > > > >    (TP).
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib/
> > > > >
> > > > > There's also a htmlized version available at:
> > > > > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-06
> > > > >
> > > > > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > > > > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-0
> > > > > 6
> > > > >
> > > > >
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> > > > >
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