Re: [mpls] This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08.txt
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From: "Matthew Bocci (Nokia)" <matthew.bocci@nokia.com>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08.txt
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Hi WG Thank you to everyone who reviewed the previous version of the draft and provided valuable comments. There were many comments embedded in the WG last call discussions on the list and we made numerous changes to address these, as well as some other editorial improvements to the text. This made it a challenge to track all the improvements. Please refer to the following diff to see where changes were made: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-07&url2=draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08&difftype=--html We would greatly appreciate feedback on the updates and any further comments on the draft. Best regards Matthew On 11/12/2023, 14:26, "Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk <mailto:adrian@olddog.co.uk>> wrote: CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when clicking links or opening attachments. See the URL nok.it/ext for additional information. Hi, The authors have been busy making changes based on the extensive review comments and discussions arising from the first last call for this document. It would be really helpful if people could start to look through the document and see which of their concerns have been addressed and what is still outstanding. Given the volume of comments, it would be no surprise if the authors need to make a further round of adjustments, but starting to look at the text (and possibly focusing on the diffs) might speed things along. Thanks, Adrian -----Original Message----- From: I-D-Announce <i-d-announce-bounces@ietf.org <mailto:i-d-announce-bounces@ietf.org>> On Behalf Of internet-drafts@ietf.org <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> Sent: 11 December 2023 12:05 To: i-d-announce@ietf.org <mailto:i-d-announce@ietf.org> Cc: mpls@ietf.org <mailto:mpls@ietf.org> Subject: I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08.txt Internet-Draft draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) WG of the IETF. Title: Requirements for Solutions that Support MPLS Network Actions Authors: Matthew Bocci Stewart Bryant John Drake Name: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08.txt Pages: 11 Dates: 2023-12-11 Abstract: This document specifies requirements for the development of MPLS network actions which affect the forwarding or other processing of MPLS packets. These requirements are informed by a number of proposals for additions to the MPLS information in the labeled packet to allow such actions to be performed, either by a transit or terminating LSR (i.e. the LER). The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements/> There is also an HTMLized version available at: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08> A diff from the previous version is available at: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-0 <https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-0> 8 Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at: rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts _______________________________________________ I-D-Announce mailing list I-D-Announce@ietf.org <mailto:I-D-Announce@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce>
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- Re: [mpls] This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mp… Matthew Bocci (Nokia)
- Re: [mpls] This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mp… Adrian Farrel
- Re: [mpls] This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mp… Adrian Farrel
- Re: [mpls] [EXTERNAL] Re: This is not a last call… Alexander Vainshtein
- Re: [mpls] This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mp… Joel Halpern
- Re: [mpls] This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mp… Haoyu Song
- Re: [mpls] This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mp… Dongjie (Jimmy)
- Re: [mpls] This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mp… Matthew Bocci (Nokia)
- Re: [mpls] This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mp… Joel Halpern