Re: [mpls] This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08.txt

Thanks Matthew.

I would *really* like to move ahead with a second WG last call on this, but before we go there, I'd like to hear from people who had comments in the previous last call. Are the changes in the right direction? Modulo stuff that might show up in a further full review, do you think the authors have done a good enough job addressing your concerns?

I'm aware that I, too, need to make that check for the review comments I submitted.

Of particular concern is for everyone to check that they are happy with the wording around ISD/PSD requirements. I think the authors have done a good job at clarifying what solutions do and don't need to do in support f ISD/PSD, but I'm just one person and I would really like to hear from a few of you who have strong opinions.

Thanks,
Adrian

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From: Matthew Bocci (Nokia) <matthew.bocci@nokia.com> 
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Subject: Re: This is not a last call! draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08.txt

Hi WG

Thank you to everyone who reviewed the previous version of the draft and provided valuable comments.

There were many comments embedded in the WG last call discussions on the list and we made numerous changes to address these, as well as some other editorial improvements to the text. This made it a challenge to track all the improvements. 

Please refer to the following diff to see where changes were made: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-07&url2=draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08&difftype=--html

We would greatly appreciate feedback on the updates and any further comments on the draft.

Best regards
Matthew 

On 11/12/2023, 14:26, "Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk <mailto:adrian@olddog.co.uk>> wrote:

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Hi,

The authors have been busy making changes based on the extensive review
comments and discussions arising from the first last call for this document.

It would be really helpful if people could start to look through the
document and see which of their concerns have been addressed and what is
still outstanding.

Given the volume of comments, it would be no surprise if the authors need to
make a further round of adjustments, but starting to look at the text (and
possibly focusing on the diffs) might speed things along.

Thanks,
Adrian

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Internet-Draft draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08.txt is now available. It
is
a work item of the Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) WG of the IETF.

Title: Requirements for Solutions that Support MPLS Network Actions
Authors: Matthew Bocci
Stewart Bryant
John Drake
Name: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08.txt
Pages: 11
Dates: 2023-12-11

Abstract:

This document specifies requirements for the development of MPLS
network actions which affect the forwarding or other processing of
MPLS packets. These requirements are informed by a number of
proposals for additions to the MPLS information in the labeled packet
to allow such actions to be performed, either by a transit or
terminating LSR (i.e. the LER).

The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements/>

There is also an HTMLized version available at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-08>

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-0 <https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-0>
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rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts

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