[mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5919 (2475)

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Subject: [mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5919 (2475)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5919,
"Signaling LDP Label Advertisement Completion".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5919&eid=2475

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>

Section: 5.3,1st para

Original Text
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   When an LDP speaker receives a Label Request message for a Typed
|  Wildcard FEC (e.g., a particular FEC Element Type) from a peer, the
   LDP speaker determines the set of bindings (as per any local
   filtering policy) to advertise to the peer for the FEC type specified
   by the request.  [...]

Corrected Text
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   When an LDP speaker receives a Label Request message for a Typed
|  Wildcard FEC (i.e., a particular FEC Element Type) from a peer, the
   LDP speaker determines the set of bindings (as per any local
   filtering policy) to advertise to the peer for the FEC type specified
   by the request.  [...]

Notes
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The parenthetical clause does not give an example, it gives
an explanation; therefore, to avoid confusion,  s!e.g.!i.e.!

Note: Same issue as addressed by EID=2473 for RFC 5918.

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RFC5919 (draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-end-of-lib-04)
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Title               : Signaling LDP Label Advertisement Completion
Publication Date    : August 2010
Author(s)           : R. Asati, P. Mohapatra, E. Chen, B. Thomas
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Multiprotocol Label Switching
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG