[mpls] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-14: (with COMMENT)
Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 01 March 2017 23:16 UTC
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Subject: [mpls] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-14: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-14: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I have no objection, but do have some a few minor comments: Substantive: -2.1, 4th paragraph from end: Can you offer guidance on what might constitute a reasonably bound wait time?\ -2.1, 2nd paragraph from end: "... MUST NOT do both": What's the scope of that MUST NOT? Does it mean MUST NOT ever? NUST NOT in the same message? Editorial: - Abstract: The last paragraph is a single, long sentence. Please consider breaking it into simpler sentences. - 2.1, paragraph 9: "This bit, once it is set by a two- step mode device, MUST stay set accordingly": Can that MUST be stated in process terms? That is, <actors> MUST NOT unset this bit..." -2.1, paragraph 11: "Without loss of generality should note that handling of Sync event messages..." : I don't follow the sentence; are words missing and/or out of order? -- "Following outlines handling of PTP Sync event message by the two-step RTM node.": I think there's a missing "the" at the start. It's absence completely changes the meaning of "following outlines"-- as written it seem like the verb is "following", but I think you mean it to be "outlines". -- I have trouble matching some pronouns to their antecedents in the rest of the paragraph.
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