Re: [mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6215 (7521)
Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> Tue, 23 May 2023 17:58 UTC
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Cc: Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, matthew.bocci@alcatel-lucent.com, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com, danfrost@cisco.com, mpls@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6215 (7521)
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I agree, but it is one to be fixed in a future revision of the text. Stewart > On 23 May 2023, at 11:47, Andrew G. Malis <agmalis@gmail.com> wrote: > > I agree with this erratum. > > Cheers, > Andy > > > On Tue, May 23, 2023 at 2:49 AM RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>> wrote: >> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6215, >> "MPLS Transport Profile User-to-Network and Network-to-Network Interfaces". >> >> -------------------------------------- >> You may review the report below and at: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7521 >> >> -------------------------------------- >> Type: Editorial >> Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com <mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>> >> >> Section: 1.1 >> >> Original Text >> ------------- >> The Transport Service Interfaces for MPLS-TP are defined in Section >> 3.4.3 of [RFC5921]. These definitions are illustrated by showing >> MPLS-TP Provider Edges (PEs) containing a UNI and an NNI. The >> figures illustrate the UNI and the NNI as a span. However, it is >> convention to illustrate these interfaces as reference points. >> Furthermore, in the case of a UNI, it is useful to illustrate the >> distribution of UNI functions between the Customer Edge (CE) side and >> the PE side of the UNI, i.e., the UNI-C (User-to-User Interface, >> Client side) and UNI-N (User-to-Network Interface, Network side), in >> order to show their relationship to one another. >> >> Corrected Text >> -------------- >> The Transport Service Interfaces for MPLS-TP are defined in Section >> 3.4.3 of [RFC5921]. These definitions are illustrated by showing >> MPLS-TP Provider Edges (PEs) containing a UNI and an NNI. The >> figures illustrate the UNI and the NNI as a span. However, it is >> convention to illustrate these interfaces as reference points. >> Furthermore, in the case of a UNI, it is useful to illustrate the >> distribution of UNI functions between the Customer Edge (CE) side and >> the PE side of the UNI, i.e., the UNI-C (User-to-Network Interface, >> Client side) and UNI-N (User-to-Network Interface, Network side), in >> order to show their relationship to one another. >> >> Notes >> ----- >> This is a very minor nit. >> >> As listed in Section 1.2., UNI stands for "User-to-Network Interface", not "User-to-User Interface". >> >> Instructions: >> ------------- >> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please >> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or >> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party >> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. >> >> -------------------------------------- >> RFC6215 (draft-ietf-mpls-tp-uni-nni-03) >> -------------------------------------- >> Title : MPLS Transport Profile User-to-Network and Network-to-Network Interfaces >> Publication Date : April 2011 >> Author(s) : M. Bocci, L. Levrau, D. Frost >> Category : INFORMATIONAL >> Source : Multiprotocol Label Switching >> Area : Routing >> Stream : IETF >> Verifying Party : IESG >> >> _______________________________________________ >> mpls mailing list >> mpls@ietf.org <mailto:mpls@ietf.org> >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls > _______________________________________________ > mpls mailing list > mpls@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls
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- Re: [mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6215 (7… Andrew G. Malis
- Re: [mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6215 (7… Stewart Bryant