[mpls] Addressing comments on draft-ietf-mpls-psc-updates-03.txt
Eric Osborne <eric@notcom.com> Mon, 21 April 2014 20:21 UTC
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From: Eric Osborne <eric@notcom.com>
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Subject: [mpls] Addressing comments on draft-ietf-mpls-psc-updates-03.txt
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Folks- I have posted draft-ietf-mpls-psc-updates-04. It addresses the gen-art comments as well as other feeback received on this list from the v-03 last call. I also shuffled things around so that the section order made more sense. This draft elicited a comment and a warning from idnits. I believe they are both OK to disregard: 1) -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC6378, but the abstract doesn't seem to directly say this. It does mention RFC6378 though, so this could be OK. It's pretty clear that the document updates rfc6378. 2) == Missing Reference: 'RFC-ietf-mpls-psc-updates-04' is mentioned on line 412, but not defined This is a self-reference which needs to be updated with the RFC number for this draft. I expect this to be good to go, but given the amount of reshuffling and new text I'd like to give folks one more shot at tweaking the language. The meat of the work is in section 2.2. Adrian, Elwyn - this contains the majority of the changes based on gen-art feedback and other discussions on the list. Please give this the once-over at your convenience. eric
- [mpls] Addressing comments on draft-ietf-mpls-psc… Eric Osborne
- Re: [mpls] [Gen-art] Addressing comments on draft… Elwyn Davies
- Re: [mpls] [Gen-art] Addressing comments on draft… Eric Osborne