Re: [mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6428 (4415)

Gregory Mirsky <gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com> Wed, 15 July 2015 17:49 UTC

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From: Gregory Mirsky <gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com>
To: David Allan I <david.i.allan@ericsson.com>, Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu>, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, "swallow@cisco.com" <swallow@cisco.com>, "jdrake@juniper.net" <jdrake@juniper.net>, "akatlas@gmail.com" <akatlas@gmail.com>, "db3546@att.com" <db3546@att.com>, "aretana@cisco.com" <aretana@cisco.com>, "rcallon@juniper.net" <rcallon@juniper.net>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6428 (4415)
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Hi Dave,
thank you for pointing to my mistake.

Loa,
if the errata cannot be corrected, please feel free to reject and I can re-submit with corrected reference to RFC 5880.

	Regards,
		Greg

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From: David Allan I 
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Cc: Gregory Mirsky; mpls@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6428 (4415)

The errata is almost correct. The body suggests the correct text "RequiredMinRxInterval" which is correct and as the field is defined in 5880. (not RequestedMinRxInterval as appears under corrected text).

Good catch
Dave

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Cc: Gregory Mirsky; mpls@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6428 (4415)

Folks,

The errata seems correct, but I'd like the authors to nod also , John, George and/or Dave.

/Loa

On 2015-07-15 02:22, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6428, "Proactive 
> Connectivity Verification, Continuity Check, and Remote Defect Indication for the MPLS Transport Profile".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6428&eid=4415
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Greg Mirsky <gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com>
>
> Section: text
>
> Original Text
> -------------
> bfd.MinRxInterval
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> bfd.RequestedMinRxInterval
>
> Notes
> -----
> Throughout the text document refers to bfd.MinRxInterval even though RFC 5880 refers to this state variable as bfd.RequiredMinRxInterval.
>
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>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC6428 (draft-ietf-mpls-tp-cc-cv-rdi-06)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Proactive Connectivity Verification, Continuity Check, and Remote Defect Indication for the MPLS Transport Profile
> Publication Date    : November 2011
> Author(s)           : D. Allan, Ed., G. Swallow Ed., J. Drake Ed.
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Multiprotocol Label Switching
> Area                : Routing
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>