Re: [mpls] working group last call on draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp

"Lizhong Jin" <lizho.jin@gmail.com> Tue, 01 October 2013 14:01 UTC

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From: Lizhong Jin <lizho.jin@gmail.com>
To: 'Loa Andersson' <loa@pi.nu>, mpls@ietf.org, draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp@tools.ietf.org, mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org, "'VIGOUREUX, MARTIN (MARTIN)'" <martin.vigoureux@alcatel-lucent.com>
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Hi Loa,
Thank you for the detail review. The word-file in audit mode is quite clear, and we will get back to you with a revised version a few days later.

Regards
Lizhong


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Loa Andersson [mailto:loa@pi.nu]
> Sent: Tuesday, October 01, 2013 5:55 PM
> To: mpls@ietf.org; draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp@tools.ietf.org; mpls-
> chairs@tools.ietf.org; VIGOUREUX, MARTIN (MARTIN)
> Subject: Re: working group last call on draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp
> 
> Authors,
> 
> I reviewed the document and has a number of comments, captured in a
> word-file (whew), but I don't have a better review tool.
> 
> There quite a bit of comments, but most are just for clarity and
> straightening up naming of message and code elements.
> 
> I've not looked at the IANA section, that is normally something the
> shepherd do when writing the shepherd write-up.
> 
> /Loa
> 
> On 2013-09-16 19:56, Loa Andersson wrote:
> > Working Group,
> >
> > this is to start a two week working group last call on
> > draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp-01.
> >
> > Please send your comment to working group mailing lists
> (mpls@ietf.org).
> >
> > We have done IPR poll on this document prior to starting the wglc.
> > All the authors responded to the IPR poll that they are not aware of
> > any IPR's relating to this document other than the one IPR already
> > disclosed while this document was an individual document. One author,
> > the inventor and the company that disclosed the IPR says that it is
> > still valid for the working group document.
> >
> > There are one IPRs disclosed against this document, however the IPR
> > disclosure count is "4", this seems to be a bug and the correct count
> > should be "1".
> >
> > The working group last call will end Friday September 30, 2913.
> >
> > /Loa
> >
> 
> --
> 
> 
> Loa Andersson                        email: loa@mail01.huawei.com
> Senior MPLS Expert                          loa@pi.nu
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