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Re: [mpls] WG Last Call and IPR Poll for for draft-ietf-mpls-sr-epe-oam-05

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From: Shraddha Hegde <shraddha@juniper.net>
To: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>, Tarek Saad <tsaad.net@gmail.com>, "mpls@ietf.org" <mpls@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] WG Last Call and IPR Poll for for draft-ietf-mpls-sr-epe-oam-05
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Hi Tom,

Thanks for the review and comments.
I have added the missing references
A section of the text was mistakenly marked as figure which I have fixed now.
I have posted a -06 version. 

Let me know if you have any further comments.

BTW, authors felt "forgery" is too harsh a word for this particular mistake in the draft.

Rgds
Shraddha


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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> 
Sent: Wednesday, September 28, 2022 4:46 PM
To: Tarek Saad <tsaad.net@gmail.com>; mpls@ietf.org
Cc: MPLS Working Chairs <mpls-chairs@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-mpls-sr-epe-oam@ietf.org
Subject: Re: WG Last Call and IPR Poll for for draft-ietf-mpls-sr-epe-oam-05

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From: mpls <mpls-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Tarek Saad <tsaad.net@gmail.com>
Sent: 27 September 2022 15:41

Dear WG,

This email starts a two-week working group last call for draft-ietf-mpls-sr-epe-oam-05 [1]

<tp>

This I-D seems seriously Not Ready.

I see [RFC5065] [RFC4271] [RFC6286] and such like in the text but turning to the I-D references, nothing like them.  This has a flavour of forgery, an I-D  that has not been produced in the manner expected in the IETF.

As such, Not Ready.

I have more technical comments for when it looks more like an IETF I-D.

Tom Petch

Please send your comments to the mpls wg mailing list (mpls@ietf.org<mailto:mpls@ietf.org>).
If necessary, comments may be sent unidirectional to the wg chairs.

This poll runs until the 12th October 2022

We are also polling for knowledge of any undisclosed IPR that applies to this document, to ensure that IPR has been disclosed in compliance with IETF IPR rules (see RFCs 3979, 4879, 3669 and 5378 for more details).
If you are listed as an author or a contributor of this document, please respond to this email and indicate whether or not you are aware of any relevant undisclosed IPR. The document won't progress without answers from all the authors and contributors.
There are currently no IPR disclosures against draft-ietf-mpls-sr-epe-oam.

Thank you,
Tarek (for the MPLS WG co-chairs)

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