[multimob] Comments on draft-deng-multimob-pmip6-requirement-00
Behcet Sarikaya <behcetsarikaya@yahoo.com> Wed, 17 September 2008 22:27 UTC
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From: Behcet Sarikaya <behcetsarikaya@yahoo.com>
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Subject: [multimob] Comments on draft-deng-multimob-pmip6-requirement-00
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Hi all, I read the draft. Here are my comments (mostly editorial): - RFC2119 is not referenced - SHALL in R7 and R9 should probably be changed to MUST as they have the same meaning according to RFC 2119. - In Sec. 4.2 you say: It is foreseeable that the MAG has to act as a multicast designated router. Hence support of MLDv2 [RFC3810] is required at the MAG. possibly change is required to MAY be required. Discuss more of these choices of support at MAG or at LMA? - Section 5. change protect mobile multicast multicast network to protect mobile multicast network. Regards, Behcet
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