Re: [multimob] Comments on draft-deng-multimob-pmip6-requirement-00

"Hui Deng" <denghui02@gmail.com> Thu, 18 September 2008 09:00 UTC

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From: Hui Deng <denghui02@gmail.com>
To: Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya@ieee.org>
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done,

updated in the next version.
thanks

-Hui

2008/9/18 Behcet Sarikaya <behcetsarikaya@yahoo.com>

>  Hi all,
>   I read the draft. Here are my comments (mostly editorial):
> - RFC2119 is not referenced
> - SHALL in R7 and R9 should probably be changed to MUST as they have the
> same meaning according to RFC 2119.
> - In Sec. 4.2 you say:
> It is foreseeable that the MAG has to act as a multicast designated
>    router.  Hence support of MLDv2 [RFC3810] is required at the MAG.
>
> possibly change is required to MAY be required.
>
> Discuss more of these choices of support at MAG or at LMA?
> - Section 5. change
> protect mobile multicast multicast network
> to protect mobile multicast network.
>
> Regards,
>
> Behcet
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