Re: [netconf] Review comments on draft-ietf-netconf-udp-notif

Pierre Francois <pierre.francois@insa-lyon.fr> Wed, 10 November 2021 07:34 UTC

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Date: Wed, 10 Nov 2021 08:33:52 +0100
From: Pierre Francois <pierre.francois@insa-lyon.fr>
To: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
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Mahesh, 

>>> * In Section 3.1, TLS is specified as a transport protocol. I think you mean
>>> TCP or HTTP2 over TCP.
>>> ZTR> This I would like to leave it to Pierre.

>> PFR> I'm afraid I don't understand the comment.

> [mj] TLS is a cryptographic protocol, not a transport protocol.

Haha ok right I'll make sure we are precise there. 

>>> * Section 6.1. Not clear on the statement “Since UDP is an unreliable
>>> transport, with DTLS, an originator or a relay may not realize ..”. What has
>>> DTLS got to do with the unreliability of the transport protocol?
>>> ZTR> This I would like to leave it to Pierre.

>> PFR> What this means is that you don't get to know whether what you produced as
>> an originator
>> got consumed by the receiver, as you would using a connection oriented
>> transport. Actually,
>> it's obvious so we may want to remove this paragraph. The intent was to not have
>> the reader think
>> dtls changes things compared to basic udp transport.

> Ok.

Great. 
Thanks again for the review, 

Cheers, 

Pierre.