Re: [Netconf] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-restconf-04: (with COMMENT)

Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> Mon, 01 October 2018 07:01 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Netconf] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-restconf-04: (with COMMENT)
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Hi,

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
> Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-restconf-04: No Objection
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> Please apply the changes resulting from the Gen-ART review: either removing or
> clarifying the text about 'ds-ephemeral'

I have applied the text suggested by Russ:

  If a server implements other datastores, such as the example
  datastore "ds-ephemeral" in the module "example-ds-ephemeral",
  the server would implement the resource {+restconf}/ds/example-
  ds-ephemeral:ds-ephemeral.

> , adding clarifying text
> about GET,

We (the authors) do not understand what edits are required for this.
The text in the draft is:

   o  [RFC8040], Section 3.5.4, paragraph 3 does not apply when
      interacting with any resource under {+restconf}/ds.


> and
> adding the missing ')' in Section 5.

Done!


/martin