Re: [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-crypto-types-29: (with COMMENT)
Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Fri, 02 February 2024 16:54 UTC
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Subject: Re: [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-crypto-types-29: (with COMMENT)
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On 2024-02-02, at 17:49, Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> wrote: > > Hi Carsten, > > I just added "(see Section 4 in <xref target="RFC4648"/>)” > > Here’s the diff: > > <t>Various examples in this document use "BASE64VALUE=" as a > placeholder value for binary data has has been base64 > - encoded. This placeholder value is used as real > - base64 encoded structures are often many lines long and > - hence distracting to the example being presented.</t> > + encoded (see Section 4 in <xref target="RFC4648"/>). This > + placeholder value is used as real base64 encoded structures > + are often many lines long and hence distracting to the example > + being presented.</t> > > Seems okay? This is not explicitly saying that the reference for doing this is RFC 7950, but I don’t see a lot of danger from this way of putting it. (please s/used as/used because/ though). Grüße, Carsten > > Kent > > >> On Feb 1, 2024, at 1:26 AM, Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> wrote: >> >> Hi Kent, >> >> I haven’t seen your changes yet. >> As long as the restatements are clearly marked as such [1], i.e., they don’t appear to make new normative requirements on their own, there is no damage. >> >> [1]: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-bormann-restatement-00.html#name-defusing-restatements >> >> Grüße, Carsten >> >> >>> On Feb 1, 2024, at 01:06, Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> wrote: >>> >>> Hi Carsten, >>> >>> Whoops, just seeing your comment after making the change. >>> I agree that it seemed not needed, but I also didn’t see any harm in adding it. >>> Thoughts? >>> >>> Kent >>> >>> >>>> On Jan 31, 2024, at 8:16 AM, Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> wrote: >>>> >>>> On 2024-01-31, at 14:04, Francesca Palombini via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: >>>>> >>>>> The document is missing a reference to RFC 4648 (and specify which encoding, >>>>> Section 4 or 5). I assume that this is the same as for RFC 7950 which states: >>>>> >>>>> Binary values are encoded with the base64 encoding scheme (see >>>>> Section 4 in [RFC4648]). >>>> >>>> I actually would not add a restatement here. Section 1.4 only explains the substitution of longer base64 encoded values in the examples by BASE64VALUE= (encoding for the meaningless 8 bytes “04 04 84 eb 85 40 2d 41” hex). >>>> >>>> The document uses base64 within YANG-XML and YANG-JSON examples only, and both RFC 7950 and (uncharacteristically for JSON) RFC 7951 use Section 4 of RFC 4648. This should not be restated — maybe this will be fixed to be base64url in a future version of RFC 7951? >>>> (RFC 9254 (YANG-CBOR) doesn’t use base64 at all for its representation of YANG “binary”, but then the crypto-types document doesn’t have YANG-CBOR examples.) >>>> >>>> Grüße, Carsten >>>> >>> >> >
- [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection on d… Francesca Palombini via Datatracker
- Re: [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection … Carsten Bormann
- Re: [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection … Francesca Palombini
- Re: [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection … Kent Watsen
- Re: [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection … Kent Watsen
- Re: [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection … Carsten Bormann
- Re: [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection … Kent Watsen
- Re: [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection … Carsten Bormann
- Re: [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection … Kent Watsen
- Re: [netconf] Francesca Palombini's No Objection … Carsten Bormann