Re: [netconf] [Errata Verified] RFC8572 (6616)

Chris Smiley <csmiley@amsl.com> Mon, 21 June 2021 20:22 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Errata Verified] RFC8572 (6616)
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Hi Rob,

The section has been updated from 4.2 to 4.2.3. to match the original errata report and RFC 8572.
Please let me know if you have any objections.

Thank you,
RFC Editor/cs


> On Jun 21, 2021, at 5:21 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been verified for RFC8572,
> "Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP)". 
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6616
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Status: Verified
> Type: Editorial
> 
> Reported by: Srihari Ramanathan <sramanathan@google.com>
> Date Reported: 2021-06-18
> Verified by: Rob Wilton (IESG)
> 
> Section: 4.2.
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>   For device-independent queries, the three bootstrapping artifacts
>   defined in Section 3 are encoded into the SVR records as follows.
> 
>   Artifact to SRV Record Mapping:
> 
>      Conveyed Information:  This artifact is not supported directly.
>         Instead, the essence of unsigned redirect information is mapped
>         to SVR records per [RFC2782].
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>   For device-independent queries, the three bootstrapping artifacts
>   defined in Section 3 are encoded into the SRV records as follows.
> 
>   Artifact to SRV Record Mapping:
> 
>      Conveyed Information:  This artifact is not supported directly.
>         Instead, the essence of unsigned redirect information is mapped
>         to SRV records per [RFC2782].
> 
> Notes
> -----
> In both places "SVR" should obviously read "SRV".
> 
> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8572 (draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-29)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP)
> Publication Date    : April 2019
> Author(s)           : K. Watsen, I. Farrer, M. Abrahamsson
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Configuration
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>