Re: [netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-26.txt

Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Fri, 05 April 2024 16:31 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-26.txt
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Just one comment.

> On Apr 4, 2024, at 10:43 PM, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:
> 
> (1) There is a nit in the tree diagram:
>  
> OLD:
>       |  +-- local-address?   inet:ip-address
>  
> NEW:
>       |  +-- local-address   inet:ip-address

Isn’t local-address a key for the list local-bind?

Cheers.

Mahesh Jethanandani
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