Re: [netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8040 (6363)

Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com> Tue, 22 December 2020 15:07 UTC

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From: Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com>
Date: Tue, 22 Dec 2020 07:06:48 -0800
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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8040 (6363)
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Hi,

This errata should be rejected.
The proposed text changes the semantics of the paragraph.
The original word "will" is not ambiguous or used in error.


Andy


On Tue, Dec 22, 2020 at 6:40 AM RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
wrote:

> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8040,
> "RESTCONF Protocol".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6363
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Technical
> Reported by: Muly Ilan <muly_i@rad.com>
>
> Section: 4.8.2.
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>    By default, the server will include all sub-resources within a
>    retrieved resource that have the same resource type as the requested
>    resource.  The exception is the datastore resource.  If this resource
>    type is retrieved, then by default the datastore and all child data
>    resources are returned.
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    By default, the server SHOULD include all sub-resources within a
>    retrieved resource that have the same resource type as the requested
>    resource.  The exception is the datastore resource.  If this resource
>    type is retrieved, then by default the datastore and all child data
>    resources are returned.
>
> Notes
> -----
> Substitute "will" by "SHOULD".
>
> Use one of the keywords of RFC2119 to clarify the expected server behavior.
>
> Instructions:
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC8040 (draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-18)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : RESTCONF Protocol
> Publication Date    : January 2017
> Author(s)           : A. Bierman, M. Bjorklund, K. Watsen
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Configuration
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>