Re: [netext] Interest to review the Logical Interface ID

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Hi Telemaco, Hi Sri,



Sorry for the delay on sending my comments on the draft-ietf-netext-logical-interface-support-09.
Here are my comments!


First of all I would like to mention that the draft is useful for the IETF, since it provides a solution in the context of Proxy Mobile IPv6 that can be used to afford inter-technology handover, multihoming, and/or  flow mobility without requiring from the mobile node IP stack specific support to that effect.



My comments are:



Comment_1: Emphasize in the Applicability Statement section (3.2) the main differences between the work provided by this document and the work done in IETF Multiple Interfaces (mif) WG!


Comment_2: Section 6.3: Provide a figure that can be used to describe the Flow Mobility Support scenario more clearly.



Comment_3: Section 6.3: In the second paragraph of this section, emphasize that the mechanisms required by the LMA to decide on which is the best MAG to be used for the forwarding of a particular flow is out of the scope of this document.



Comment_4: Provide a caption to Figure 2.



Comment_5: The document contains many editorials. The main ones are:

Section 3.1, page 5, first bullet: please include an empty space between "System" and "[TS23401]".



Section 3.1, page 5, second bullet, the word "that" is used twice in sequence, please remove one of them ("A logical interface denotes a mechanism that that logically"



Section 5.2,page 10, the paragraph should be ended with a "."! ("are depicted in Figure 2.")



Best regards,
Georgios

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Hi Rajeev,



Please note that I am interested in reviewing the draft!

However, please note that this will happen after the 15th of August!



Best regards,

Georgios

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Van: netext [[e-mail]] namens Rajeev Koodli [[e-mail]]
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Onderwerp: [netext] Interest to review the Logical Interface ID

Hi,

as discussed at the Toronto meeting, we are looking for at least three people who are interested in reviewing the ID: http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netext-logical-interface-support-09

Please respond if you are interested, and Cc the chairs: [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>

Thanks.

-Rajeev



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