Re: [netlmm] WGLC: draft-ietf-netlmm-pmipv6-mib

[<[e-mail]>]

Dear Jonne, all,

you are right - perhaps, as it is a formal document - only some very
formal comments on nits I detected (i.e. no serious concern or outcry
from my side ;-) ) :

Both 'Acknowledgement' (e.g. p. 27, 34) and 'Acknowledgment' (all
others) used throughout the draft
PMIPv6 referenced as both [PMIPv6] (p. 3) and as [RFC5213] (p. 3 - 59)
Missing 'space' on p. 4 (specification[RFC3775])
References [RFC4831], [RFC2863] on p. 3, [RFC4295] on p. 4, [RFC-4282]
on p. 7, [RFC-4283] on p. 26 ... => missing in ch. 8

And even the least on p. 59: 
'Support in IPv6 RFC 3775, June 2004.' instead of 'Support in IPv6 RFC
3775,  June 2004.'
'and Patil, B., Proxy Mobile IPv6, RFC 5213' instead of 'and Patil, B.
Proxy Mobile IPv6), RFC 5213' 
'Network Addresses, RFC 4001, February 2005.' instead of 'Network
Addresses, RFC4001, February 2005.'

Best regards

Dirk 


Von: [e-mail] [mailto:[e-mail]] Im Auftrag
von Soininen, Jonne (NSN - FI/Espoo)
Gesendet: Donnerstag, 3. Dezember 2009 14:50
An: Jonne Soininen; [e-mail]
Betreff: Re: [netlmm] WGLC: draft-ietf-netlmm-pmipv6-mib

Hello,

Today the last call is going to end on this. I think MIBs are a bit
different than other documents, and if there is no outcry on the
wrongness
of the document, we might just see that this passes the last call.

Cheers,

Jonne.


On 11/19/09 11:19 AM, "Jonne Soininen" <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hello,
> 
> The pmip6 MIB has been available and stable for quite some time.
Therefore I
> would like to start the last call on the draft.
> 
> Last Call: draft-ietf-netlmm-pmipv6-mib
> Starts: Now
> Ends: December 3rd, 2009, end of business in Pacific time zone.
> 
> Please, read the document and send your comments to the list.
> 
> Cheers,
> 
> Jonne.

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Jonne Soininen
Nokia Siemens Networks

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