[netmod] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09: (with COMMENT)

Suresh Krishnan <suresh@kaloom.com> Wed, 24 January 2018 15:43 UTC

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Subject: [netmod] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09: (with COMMENT)
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Suresh Krishnan has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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* Lots of places in the document where NMDA is misspelled as NDMA. Please fix.

* Section 9.1.

The ranges for AdvDefaultLifetime and MaxRtrAdvInterval have been changed by
RFC-to-be-8319 to update the values specified in RFC4861.  Please change these
ranges to the new values.

OLD:

leaf max-rtr-adv-interval {
           type uint16 {
             range "4..1800";
           }

NEW:

leaf max-rtr-adv-interval {
           type uint16 {
             range "4..65535";
           }

OLD:

         leaf default-lifetime {
           type uint16 {
             range "0..9000";
           }

NEW:
         leaf default-lifetime {
           type uint16 {
             range "0..65535";
           }