Re: [netmod] Shepherd review on draft-ietf-netmod-yang-instance-file-format-10

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See below as BALAZS2. Removed previously agreed issues. Uploaded as -12.



P.S. Kent, if further edits are needed, shall I do them via new uploaded versions, or shall I just send the update for checking to you?


From: Kent Watsen <> 
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Subject: Re: [netmod] Shepherd review on draft-ietf-netmod-yang-instance-file-format-10


Hi Balazs,


On Apr 8, 2020, at 8:06 AM, Balázs Lengyel < <> > wrote:


Hello Kent,
Thanks for the review. See answers below.
I tried to address all you comments, sorry if I missed something. 
I updated the draft and uploaded a -11 version. Please check/advance it.

One question I could not settle: XML2RFC does not accept
     <?rfc include='reference.I-D.netmod-yang-module-versioning'?>      
     <?rfc include='reference.I-D.verdt-netmod-yang-module-versioning'?>      
Why ? Please help.


Because it’s a working group document now and so uses the “ietf” prefix.  Try this:


     <?rfc include='reference.I-D.ietf-netmod-yang-module-versioning'?>  

BALAZS2: OK, thanks

Structural Issues:

- S5 contains an mix of important and unimportant information.   I think that the most important thing to state that the module defines an offline format that MAY contain security sensitive information, and thus safe handling is advised.  Maybe also say something about because the YANG module only defines a “structure”,  the Security Considerations doesn’t follow the template specified in  For instance: s/is designed as a wrapper specifying a format and a metadata header for YANG instance data defined by the content-schema/specifies an offline format/
BALAZS: Most of text was required to be put there by earlier reviewers (Mostly Juergen and Acee Lindem) and sent to the mailing list.
I added that we do not follow the security template for YANG models.


Please add the reference to per above.



 - S8.1: agreed that RFC8525 is Normative, but the only place it it referenced is in a non-normative section…please add a ref to it from a normative section.
BALAZS: It is referenced from the YANG module which is normative.


You just added that reference, but not correctly:

  1) the “reference” doesn’t follow the standard format

  2) the paragraph at the top of 3.2 doesn’t also list RFC 8525

BALAZS2: OK, corrected

Editorial Issues:

 - Appendix B:
    - s/For instance data/Instance data/

BALAZS: Sorry, that would make the sentence incorrect.


Do you mean it to be “For instance, data” then?   If “instance data” is supposed to be read together, maybe use a hyphen or quotes?

BALAZS2: OK, added quotes

- the syntax grammar used in S3, P8 doesn’t make sense - use ABNF?



Please fix the grammar.


BALAZS2: OK, Updated grammar.

- In S3, P8: “the semicolons and the decimal point, if present, shall be replaced by underscores” - why are they not escaped?

BALAZS: This is a file name. Escaping in file names does not always work (depending on the filesystem and tools used). This is more simple and understandable


No, this is a special case CLR and we never do this.  I see this idea has been in the document since -03, so it must’ve bee discussed, can you point me to the discussion? 


FWIW, my OS doesn’t even require escaping colons.  BTW, they’re “colons” (not semicolons).

BALAZS2: Windows doesn’t allow colons in the filename. Although it’s not everyone’s favorite OS, it is pretty widespread. 

For Ubuntu Linux and a bash shell the colon is allowed, but tab extension does not work properly.

Sorry, I don’t remember any discussion on this. Timestamps were discussed, but I don’t find any arguments about this substitution.

Changed semicolon->colon

- It is unclear how the "inline-content-schema” feature could ever be used.  I.e., there are no protocol-accessible nodes in the module…

BALAZS: The system can declare in supported/not-supported in design documentation. E.g. in UC2, Preloading Default Configuration the designer preparing instance data, can decide to use or not use the inline-content-schema based on this.


When I make statements like this, please see it as an opportunity to improve the document.  In this case, please modify the inline-content-schema’s “description” statement to indicate that the feature is never supported by a server, and that it is intended to be enabled via out-of-band documentation.  BTW, was this discussed by the WG?

BALAZS2: It was discussed that this inline-content-schema seems complicated, so it should not be mandatory. After this I introduced the feature. AFAIK no discussion after this.

Actually it might be supported by a server: 

*	preloading configuration data: the server may or may not be able the inline-content-schema. The designers preparing the instance data sets to be loaded onto the server may use this declaration as a design guide
*	if a server also produces instance data files (e.g. UC5  Storing diagnostics data), and I am writing a post-processing tool to handle these files, I would use the support for this feature as an input requirement: does my tool need to support inline-content-schema

While the server will probably not declare support for the ietf-yang-instance-data module and this feature, the support of the statement about feature support would be available in the product documentation.

I changed the description to 

  feature inline-content-schema {


      "This feature indicates that inline content-schema  

          option is supported. Support for this feature might 

         be documented only via out-of-band documentation.";


Is that OK?

- "leaf-list inline-module" is "min-elements 1” and "ordered-by user”, but "leaf-list module” has neither (though it may be that ordering is irrelevant for simple-inline).

BALAZS: ordered-by  removed. It doesn't really mean anything. In this case there is no chance of the system reordering a list a CLI/Netconf/Restconf client provided.
Min-elements is not needed for simplified-inline as the case will only be selected if there is at least one "module" leaf-list entry. It is needed for inline because otherwise the case could contain an " inline-schema" anydata section and no "inline-module" entries. That would not be usable.


That may be true, but it’s equally true for the other leaf-list.  It's inconsistent.  

BALAZS2: OK. added min-elements 1;  


BTW, is "choice content-schema-spec” meant to be “mandatory true”?  - because, currently, 'content-schema” doesn’t have to be specified according to the model…

BALAZS2: No, it is optional. As described in section 2.1 there is an external method to define the content schema outside the instance data file.

      External Method: Do not include the "content-schema" node; the

      user needs to obtain the information through external documents.



- The last two sentences of the “description” statement on line 207 in the YANG module contradict each other.

BALAZS: Why ? I don't see the contradiction. If you know a single datastore specify it. If not omit the leaf. If the leaf is omitted, the situation is unknown.


I think the word “undefined” is throwing me.  Maybe “unspecified” would be better?

BALAZS: OK changed to unspecified



Structural issues:

- The list under "Metadata SHOULD include:” is not indented.

BALAZS: OK, added


I don’t see it.  The way to do it is by adding a fake “list”, with missing symbols, to put the other list inside...



- The three examples should be <section> of their own (e.g., 3.2.x)



Better, but:

  - the new titles don’t match the UC titles

  - perhaps remove the “UCx,” prefix from the titles?  It looks weird in

    the ToC and they're not needed in the title since the first sentence

    relates the example to the UC already...


  - BTW, missing word “in”:  s/The example illustrates UC[125] Section 1

    /The example illustrates UC[125] in Section 1/


- The “inline” choice node is generally confusing.  I can’t tell if it’s missing container called “inline” or if the two descendant nodes are poorly named.  In either case, it would be best to try to make it more readable.

BALAZS: Yes it is complicated. Some members of Netmod (I think Rob W.) Asked for a full, powerful, flexible way of documenting the content schema. In some cases it is needed.


I’m not saying that it’s purpose is confusing, I’m saying that its poorly named or missing a parent container.  Try looking at your examples with “fresh” eyes.  The node names "inline-module” and “inline-schema” are odd.  It seems like “inline-module” could be “anydata-schema” and "inline-schema” could be “module-data”?


There is a parent container “content-schema” around the choice.


inline-module: the name should contain the word module, because the content is a module for a specific purpose. What it really is: Modules-defining-inline-content-schema, but I didn’t find a good short version for this. Modules-defining-inline-content-schema.

anydata-schema doesn’t sound right because:

*	Each individual leaf-list entry is just one module not a complete schema as a unit. As there are two anydata nodes, it could also be confusing which do we mean.

inline-schema : the name should contain the word schema, because this is what defines the content-schema.

Module-data does not really tell you what this is or what it’s purpose is. It can also be confused with content-data.

IMHO the current names inside a content-schema container are not bad, but any better proposals?


Editorial issues:

- remove P3’s forward-reference to S3, P9?

BALAZS:  Sorry, I did not find this. Could you specify the text around it


   Two formats are specified based on the XML and JSON YANG encodings.
   Later as other YANG encodings (e.g., CBOR) are defined, further
   instance data formats may be specified.


Which is normatively described below.  I’d either delete or move this text down so it’s all together.

BALAZS2: This is not a forward reference. “Later” in this case means in this case means Later in time not later in the document. This sentence was specifically requested by earlier reviewers. How would you word this sentence.


FWIW, generally, your writing style involves a lot of prefacing, whereas it’s somewhat more readable to have minimal text possible, ideally most text being in the YANG module themselves.  As an aside, I also sometimes start a document with use-cases (to build support), but then delete the use-cases after adoption.  I find the prevalence of the use-cases here detracting from readability.



- s/e.g., UC5 documenting diagnostic data/(e.g., UC5 [Section 2])/

BALAZS: I prefer to use the short name of the use case instead of the reference. IMHO it provides information instantly without a look-up. Is that a problem?


I think I mentioned this above already, but the titles are wrong.  


Myself, I’d remove all the “Figure” postambles; I never title my figures, just more to have to look at and maintain.  In the case, this is where the US titles are again incorrect...

BALAZS2: OK, Figure” postambles removed.


- s/for "UC2 Preloading Data”/for UC2 [Section 2],/

BALAZS: I prefer to use the short name of the use case instead of the reference. IMHO it provides information instantly without a look-up. Is that a problem?


Same comment used elsewhere.  Firstly, the titles are incorrect.  Second, the presentation is rather informal, a more formalized version might be:

OLD: (e.g., for "UC2 Preloading Data" the 

NEW: (e.g., for the "Preloading default configuration data" use-case (UC2 in Section 1), the


BTW, I think the period from the end of the previous sentence is meant to follow the close-parentheses here...


- S3.1.1 P2 doesn’t makes sense to me (esp. the verdt ref, which likely should be removed or better explained)

BALAZS: This was explicitly requested by 2 members of the verdt team. I tried to amend the text to make it more understandable, however IMHO we should not try to explain the usage of revision label here. Also this is just an example.



   (e.g., revision labels which can be used as alternative to the revision




    (e.g., revision labels, described by [I-D.verdt-netmod-yang-module-versioning]

    as alternative to the revision date). 



BTW, immediately following, the text says "See Section 2.2.”   This doesn’t mean

Anything to me.  Do you want to say something like “An example of the “inline” method is provided in 2.2.1”?

BALAZS: OK, changed.

- s/is based on "UC1, Documenting Server Capabilities”/exemplifies UC1 [Section 2]/

BALAZS: Exemplifying is an uncommon word I find ugly. Is the current text hard to understand or misleading? 

I changed it to " The following example illustrates ..." I hope that's OK.


I’m unsure if it’s possible for something to be “based on” or “illustrate” a use case.  Illustrate is better though, maybe “reflects” or “epitomizes"?

BALAZS2: OK, changed all illustrates to reflects

BTW, missing “in":  s/illustrates UC1 Section 1/illustrates UC1 in Section 1/



- s/- Use case 1, Documenting server capabilities/Exemplifying UC1/

BALAZS: Exemplifying is an uncommon word I find ugly. Is the current text hard to understand or misleading?  
IMHO the string stating  the name of the use case is more helpful then a reference, that needs to be looked up.
I changed it to " The following example illustrates ..." I hope that's OK.


Same comment as above.

BALAZS2: OK, Figure tiles removed as you proposed.

- s/is based on "UC2, Preloading Default Configuration”/exemplifies UC2 [Section 2]/

BALAZS: Exemplifying is an uncommon word I find ugly. Is the current text hard to understand or misleading?  
I changed it to " The following example illustrates ..." I hope that's OK.


Same comment as above.

BALAZS2: OK, changed to reflects

- s/- Use case 2, Preloading access control data/Exemplifying UC2/

BALAZS: Exemplifying is an uncommon word I find ugly. Is the current text hard to understand or misleading?  
IMHO the string stating  the name of the use case is more helpful then a reference, that needs to be looked up


Same comment as above.

BALAZS2: OK, Figure tiles removed as you proposed.

>  - s/is based on UC5 Storing diagnostics data/exemplifies UC5 [Section 2]/
BALAZS: OK. but I changed it to: exemplifies UC5, Storing diagnostics data. IMHO the string stating  the name of the use case is more helpful then a reference, that needs to be looked up.
I changed it to " The following example illustrates "UC2, Preloading ..." I hope that's OK.


Same comment as above.
BALAZS2: OK, changed all illustrates to reflects

- s/- UC5 Storing diagnostics data/Exemplifying UC5/

BALAZS: Exemplifying is an uncommon word I find ugly. Is the current text hard to understand or misleading?  
IMHO the string stating  the name of the use case is more helpful then a reference, that needs to be looked up.>
I changed it to " The following example illustrates ..." I hope that's OK.


Same comment as above.
BALAZS2: OK, Figure tiles removed as you proposed.

Editorial issues inside the YANG module:
- "description" statement on line 74: rephrase to make more sense.

BALAZS: Other people thought it was OK. Any specific suggestion?



      "A data structure to define a format for
       YANG instance data sets. Consists of meta-data about
       the instance data set and the real content-data.”;


      "A data structure to define a format for
       YANG instance data.   The majority of the YANG nodes provide

       meta-data about the instance data; the instance data itself is

       is contained only in the 'content-data’ node.”;



- :description" statement on line 92: so confusing.  Just write “The ‘revision' of the 'ietf-yang-instance-data’ module used to encode this 'instance-data-set’.”


- “description" statement on line 100: s/content schema/schema (i.e., YANG modules)/?

BALAZS: The term "content-schema" is defined in the terminology section.  It defines  


Fine, but please add "(i.e., YANG modules)” so people will have better clue 

- “type string” statement on lines 109 and 131 are missing a “pattern" statement.

BALAZS: OK, Defined it as a typedef.


Good!  But I’m unsure about the pattern statement (esp. "pattern '.|..|[^xX].*|.[^mM].*|..[^lL].*’;”)…did you copy/paste it from somewhere?

BALAZS2: The initial part, and the section you mention is from RFC6991 I-D.ietf-netmod-yang-module-versioning

          A YANG identifier MUST NOT start with any possible

          combination of the lowercase or uppercase character

          sequence 'xml'.

- “description" statement on line 110: should this be mostly the same as the description statement of line 134, sans the bit regarding features, deviations, etc.?

BALAZS: Paragraphs 2,3 are the same. Paragraphs 1, 4,5,6 are really different. Inline is not just the same list with features, it involves one more level of indirection in defining the content schema.


If you say so,



- line 152: s/ietf-yang-library@2019-01-04/revision "2019-01-04” of the "ietf-yang-library” module/?


- P2 in the “description" statements on lines 220 and 249: s/For instance data sets/Instance data sets/

BALAZS: The sentence will not make sense unless I change the comma at the end of sentence to a colon.


Hmmm, that didn’t come out very well.  This is the same issue as before, whereby “For instance data...” looks like it should be read “For instance, data…”.  Maybe you can find a better way to express this?


PS: this command produces output:  pyang -f yang --keep-comments --yang-line-length 69 ietf-yang-instance-data@2020-04-02.yang <mailto:ietf-yang-instance-data@2020-04-02.yang>  > tmp; diff ietf-yang-instance-data@2020-04-02.yang <mailto:ietf-yang-instance-data@2020-04-02.yang>  tmp


New: missing space: s/artwork folding[I-D.ietf-netmod-artwork-folding]/artwork folding [I-D.ietf-netmod-artwork-folding]/


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