Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06.txt

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Thu, 11 July 2019 09:46 UTC

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Hi Kent,

Thanks for this.  I think 4d is suggesting putting the rfc number in the 
comment block too, but having it where it is may be sufficient - you can 
add it now or see if there's a request for this later.

I'll ask Ignas (our AD) if he wants it submitted now or once the ID gate 
reopens.

Lou


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On July 10, 2019 10:34:54 PM Kent Watsen <kent@watsen.net> wrote:

> Hi Lou (shepherd),
>
> The requested updates have been pushed to GitHub, as can be seen by the 
> commit diff: 
> https://github.com/netmod-wg/artwork-folding/commit/24a1b25abd4d33c2ac07f09b1daa8725b5061f4c 
> <https://github.com/netmod-wg/artwork-folding/commit/24a1b25abd4d33c2ac07f09b1daa8725b5061f4c>.
>
> -07 will be posted to Datatracker when the submission window reopens (or 
> sooner, if you request an exception).
>
> PS: Erik and I are listed as copyright holders, in addition to IETF Trust, 
> as seemed to be expected by (4c) in the link you provided.  Please let me 
> know if any adjustments are needed.
>
> Thanks,
> Kent (as an author)
>
>
>
>> On Jul 10, 2019, at 5:40 PM, Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Kent, Authors,
>> 
>> Sorry for the delay in processing this.  WRT your comments, see below:
>> 
>> On 6/27/2019 5:35 PM, Kent Watsen wrote:
>>> 
>>> This update primarily regards the non-normative script:
>>> 
>>>     - renamed to "rfcfold"
>>>     - now only uses sed one-liners
>>>     - auto-detects if platforms `[g]sed` and `pcregrep` are present and
>>>        suitable, outputting an error message if not.
>>>     - cleans up the temporary directory if exits for any reason
>>>     - improved error message around the script not implementing the
>>>       force-fold logic.
>>> 
>>>     Special thanks to Eric Auerswald for supplying the pull requests
>>>     for much of the above!
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Outside the updates to the script:
>>> 
>>>     - renamed 9.3:
>>>           OLD: Example Showing Smart Folding
>>>           NEW: Example Showing "Smart" Folding
>>> 
>>>     - renamed Appendix A:
>>>           OLD: POSIX Shell Script: rfcfold
>>>           NEW: POSIX Shell Script
>>> 
>>> 
>>> My only comments are:
>>> 
>>>     1) the script itself doesn't name itself "rfcfold" anywhere.
>>>             - albeit, the "name" attribute in the XML is set to "rfcfold".
>> I think adding a name would be good -- but this is a non-blocking comment.
>> 
>>> 
>>>     2) if the script is expected to be distributed, we may want/need to
>>>         add a copyright statement and/or a pointer to its GitHub repo.
>>> 
>>> 
>> I believe the trust requires a specific license in all code segments in 
>> RFCs, see https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/IETF-TLP-5.htm 
>> <https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/IETF-TLP-5.htm> section 4.  I think 
>> this needs to be added before the document can be submitted for publication.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> 
>> Lou
>> 
>> (as Shepherd)
>> 
>> 
>> 
>>> Thanks,
>>> Kent
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> On Jun 27, 2019, at 5:20 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org 
>>>> <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>>> This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.
>>>> 
>>>>        Title           : Handling Long Lines in Inclusions in Internet-Drafts and RFCs
>>>>        Authors         : Kent Watsen
>>>>                          Adrian Farrel
>>>>                          Qin Wu
>>>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06.txt
>>>> 	Pages           : 26
>>>> 	Date            : 2019-06-27
>>>> 
>>>> Abstract:
>>>>   This document defines two strategies for handling long lines in
>>>>   width-bounded text content.  One strategy is based on the historic
>>>>   use of a single backslash ('\') character to indicate where line-
>>>>   folding has occurred, with the continuation occurring with the first
>>>>   non-space (' ') character on the next line.  The second strategy
>>>>   extends the first strategy by adding a second backslash character to
>>>>   identify where the continuation begins and thereby able to handle
>>>>   cases not supported by the first strategy.  Both strategies use a
>>>>   self-describing header enabling automated reconstitution of the
>>>>   original content.
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding/ 
>>>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding/>
>>>> 
>>>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06 
>>>> <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06>
>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06 
>>>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06>
>>>> 
>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06 
>>>> <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>>>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>>> 
>>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ <ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/>
>>>> 
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