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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: Kent Watsen <kent@watsen.net>, Christian Hopps <chopps@chopps.org>
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From: Kent Watsen <kent@watsen.net>
Sent: 12 November 2020 00:36

Chris updated the draft per comments from Tom Petch received during the WGLC back in March (yes, it’s been that long).

Tom, can you review the updates to see if all your concerns were addressed?

<tp>

The YANG contact should include WG Web and WG List and Editor

dates need updating but probably best left to the RFC Editor

RFC8126 proposes the term 'group' for the top level rather than 'new category'

s.6.3 has XXX rather than XXXX

I note that the YANG module requires 'earth' but the text is always 'the earth' probably worth an explanatory note in the text

I am curious why the YANG module uses tilde to bracket geodetic-system

Tom Petch


Thanks,
Kent  // as Shepherd



On Nov 11, 2020, at 4:26 PM, Christian Hopps <chopps@chopps.org<mailto:chopps@chopps.org>> wrote:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location/

indicates status is Revised ID needed which I believe was addressed by the below publication.

Thanks,
Chris.

On Jul 29, 2020, at 6:37 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.

       Title           : A YANG Grouping for Geographic Locations
       Author          : Christian Hopps
Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-05.txt
Pages           : 25
Date            : 2020-07-29

Abstract:
  This document defines a generic geographical location object YANG
  grouping.  The geographical location grouping is intended to be used
  in YANG models for specifying a location on or in reference to the
  Earth or any other astronomical object.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location/

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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-05

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https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-05


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