Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-15.txt

Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Wed, 17 January 2018 07:11 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-15.txt
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Hi Mahesh,

There is an error with the yangdump-pro:

    Error: Feature 'match-on-eth and match-on-ipv4' not found for
    if-feature statement
    ietf-access-control-list@2018-01-16.yang:242.16: error(250):
    definition not found

    Error: Feature 'match-on-eth and match-on-ipv6' not found for
    if-feature statement
    ietf-access-control-list@2018-01-16.yang:248.16: error(250):
    definition not found

    Error: Feature 'match-on-eth and match-on-ipv4
    and match-on-ipv6' not found for if-feature statement
    ietf-access-control-list@2018-01-16.yang:253.16: error(250):
    definition not found

    ***
    *** 3 Errors, 0 Warnings

See http://www.claise.be/IETFYANGPageCompilation.html

Also, you want to inform and help the dependent YANG modules (Yang 
impact analysis for draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model 
<https://www.yangcatalog.org/yang-search/impact_analysis.php?modules[]=ietf-access-control-list@2018-01-16.yang&modules[]=ietf-ethertypes@2018-01-16.yang&modules[]=ietf-packet-fields@2018-01-16.yang&recurse=0&rfcs=1&show_subm=1&show_dir=both>) 
validate correctly.

Regards, Benoit
> This version of the drafts addresses comments received during the last run of the LC. We, the authors, believe that this document is ready for LC.
>
>> On Jan 16, 2018, at 7:11 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : Network Access Control List (ACL) YANG Data Model
>>         Authors         : Mahesh Jethanandani
>>                           Lisa Huang
>>                           Sonal Agarwal
>>                           Dana Blair
>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-15.txt
>> 	Pages           : 51
>> 	Date            : 2018-01-16
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document describes a data model of Access Control List (ACL)
>>    basic building blocks.
>>
>>    Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)
>>
>>    This draft contains many placeholder values that need to be replaced
>>    with finalized values at the time of publication.  This note
>>    summarizes all of the substitutions that are needed.  Please note
>>    that no other RFC Editor instructions are specified anywhere else in
>>    this document.
>>
>>    Artwork in this document contains shorthand references to drafts in
>>    progress.  Please apply the following replacements
>>
>>    o  "XXXX" --> the assigned RFC value for this draft both in this
>>       draft and in the YANG models under the revision statement.
>>
>>    o  Revision date in model needs to get updated with the date the
>>       draft gets approved.  The date also needs to get reflected on the
>>       line with <CODE BEGINS>.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-15
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-15
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-15
>>
>>
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