[nfsv4] Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-10: (with COMMENT)

[Warren Kumari <[e-mail]>]

Warren Kumari has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-10: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for this.

I had one readability issue -- I find:
" control communication requirements:  are for a layout type the
      details regarding information on layouts, stateids, file metadata,
      and file data which must be communicated between the metadata
      server and the storage devices."

to be very hard to read. I tried for a while to break this up into multiple
sentences but was unable. It would be nice if the authors could succeed where I
failed...