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Re: [nfsv4] Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-10: (with COMMENT)

Tom Haynes <loghyr@gmail.com> Mon, 16 April 2018 23:34 UTC

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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-10: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks Warren, Ill try to clean it up.


> On Apr 16, 2018, at 9:57 AM, Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net> wrote:
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> Warren Kumari has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-10: No Objection
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> Thank you for this.
> 
> I had one readability issue -- I find:
> " control communication requirements:  are for a layout type the
>      details regarding information on layouts, stateids, file metadata,
>      and file data which must be communicated between the metadata
>      server and the storage devices."
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> to be very hard to read. I tried for a while to break this up into multiple
> sentences but was unable. It would be nice if the authors could succeed where I
> failed...
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