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Re: [nfsv4] Working group recharter

Mike Kupfer <mike.kupfer@oracle.com> Wed, 26 July 2017 22:25 UTC

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In-Reply-To: <CADaq8jfget+Yt05KL8CrPDMN6f8Bv+UVQG_N0d=jPNsu=DAKdA@mail.gmail.com> (David Noveck's message of "Sun, 23 Jul 2017 07:23:41 -0400")
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David Noveck writes:

> I'd like people to look at the current draft and send mail to the list
> about any issues they see.

I don't have any high-level concerns, just a couple editorial nits.

- General Section, 2nd bullet: maybe add a comma after "related ONC
  components".

- Extension Section, slide 1, 1st bullet: the wording is a bit awkward.
  How about

    The NFSv4 protocol is designed to allow extension by the definition
    of new operations, new attributes, and new pNFS layout types, as
    well as the creation of minor versions.

cheers,
mike

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