Re: [nfsv4] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-mv0-trunking-update-03: (with COMMENT)

Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Wed, 16 January 2019 17:49 UTC

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Date: Wed, 16 Jan 2019 11:49:15 -0600
From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
To: David Noveck <davenoveck@gmail.com>
CC: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, draft-ietf-nfsv4-mv0-trunking-update@ietf.org, nfsv4-chairs@ietf.org, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, NFSv4 <nfsv4@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-mv0-trunking-update-03: (with COMMENT)
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On Wed, Jan 16, 2019 at 12:38:34PM -0500, David Noveck wrote:
> > General: I don't expect a change in approach this late in the process,
> 
> Given that we have already gone through the working group process, making a
> change at this point would occasion a significant delay.
> 
> > but I
> > think the approach of this update (replacing, inserting, and updating
> sections
> > in the updated RFC) is pretty unfriendly to the readers.
> 
> On the othe hand, if we just produced an updated v4.0 section 8, the result
> would be hard to review, in that you would force readers and reviewers to
> diff old and new documents to see what has changed.

I already have to diff old and new documents to see what has changed; with
a single updated section 8, I would be doing one diff operation instead of
four.  My diff tool is smart enough to not show me the sections that
haven't changed.

-Benjamin