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[nmrg] Re: Request for Review on NMRG Draft - Use Cases and Practices for Intent-Based Networking

"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Tue, 27 October 2026 15:14 UTC

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Date: Wed, 28 Oct 2026 00:14:01 +0900
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Hi Yong-Geun,
I have addressed all your comments and submitted the revised draft:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-irtf-nmrg-ibn-usecases-04

I attached the revision letter.

Could you check whether my revision satisfies your comments?

If you have more comments, please let me know.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul

On Tue, Jul 14, 2026 at 7:55 AM Yong-Geun Hong <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Dear Paul,
>
> Having read the document, I thought it was well written and ready for the
> next stage.
>
> Please find attached my review, which I hope will help you to improve it
> further.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Yong-Geun.
>
> *보낸 사람: *Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
> *날짜: *화요일, 2026년 7월 7일 오전 12:41
> *받는 사람: *King, Daniel <d.king@lancaster.ac.uk>; Aijun Wang <
> wangaijun@tsinghua.org.cn>; Dr. Byoungman Robert An <bman@keti.re.kr>;
> Abdelkader Mekrache <abdelkader.mekrache@eurecom.fr>; Alexander Clemm <
> ludwig@clemm.org>; Prof. Yong-Geun Hong <yghong@dju.kr>; Prof. Joo-Sang
> Youn <jsyoun@deu.ac.kr>; Bien Aime Mugabarigira <mubienaime@gmail.com>
> *참조: *nmrg <nmrg@irtf.org>; Jérôme FRANCOIS <jerome.francois@uni.lu>;
> skku-iotlab-members <skku-iotlab-members@googlegroups.com>
> *주제: *[nmrg] Request for Review on NMRG Draft - Use Cases and Practices
> for Intent-Based Networking
>
> Hi Daniel, Aijun, Robert, Abdel, Alex, Yong-Geun, Joo-Sang, Bien Aime, and
> NMRG,
> Could you review the NMRG draft titled "Use Cases and Practices for
> Intent-Based Networking" by July 13, 2026?
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-irtf-nmrg-ibn-usecases-03
>
> In the last IETF-125 NMRG session, I presented the revised draft after
> addressing all of Jerome's comments.
> - Slides in IETF-125 NMRG Session
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/slides-125-nmrg-use-cases-and-practices-for-intent-based-networking/
>
> I believe this draft is mature for the RG last call.
>
> Before requesting the RG last call in the IETF-126 NMRG session,
> I would like you to review this draft for further improvement and share
> your valuable comments with us.
>
> Thanks in advance.
>
> Best Regards,
> Paul
> --
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