[NSIS] Fwd: Re: AD review of draft-ietf-nsis-y1541-qosm-07
Al Morton <acmorton@att.com> Wed, 06 January 2010 22:29 UTC
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Subject: [NSIS] Fwd: Re: AD review of draft-ietf-nsis-y1541-qosm-07
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NSIS, FYI without attachment, Al >X-Mailer: QUALCOMM Windows Eudora Version 7.1.0.9 >Date: Wed, 06 Jan 2010 17:15:24 -0500 >To: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>, > draft-ietf-nsis-y1541-qosm@tools.ietf.org >From: Al Morton <acmorton@att.com> > > >Hi Magnus, > >It took some extra time to sort-out the interactions/coverage >between the QSPEC and the Y.1541 QOSM memos (and to celebrate >the holidays, of course), but we have agreement now. > >All your comments below have been addressed in -y1541-qosm-08, >but note that the term M (Max packet size) will be restored >in the TMOD parameter of the QSPEC memo and defined there. >Expect a revised version of the QSPEC shortly. > >Also, the Y.1541-QOSM memo has reaped benefits from some >of your comments on the QSPEC, thanks to an active author >in common, Jerry. > >Otherwise, a review of the diff 7->8 file attached will reveal how >we have adopted your comments. > >thanks from the Y.1541-QOSM authors, >Al > > >At 08:47 AM 10/16/2009, Magnus Westerlund wrote: >>Hi, >> >>Here are my AD comments on Y.1541 QoSM. >> >>1. Section 2.2: Please include units for all the parameters that has units. >> >>2. Section 3.1: Reference for IEEE floating point spec is missing. >> >>3. Section 3.1: What are the definitions of the Bp and M parameter? >> >>4. Section 3.2: Why are there a discussion in the document for what the >>reserved bits may be used to? Aren't they either reserved for future >>extension or fully defined? If reserved the current sender and receiver >>behavior need to be defined. Normally; SHALL be set to 0 and SHALL be >>ignored on reception. >> >>5. Section 5: >>This section defines the registries and initial codepoint assignments >> for the QSPEC template, in accordance with BCP 26 [RFC5226]. It also >> defines the procedural requirements to be followed by IANA in >> allocating new codepoints. >> >>This seems copied from the QSPEC document. It needs to reworded to >>correctly indicate what it does. I would also put have subsection for >>each of the IANA actions the draft do defines: >> >>1. Register two QOSEC Parameters >>2. Define a new registry for Restoriation Priority Parameter. >> >>6. Section 6. I don't quite believe that there are no additional >>security considerations around either the model nor the added >>parameters. They may very well be handled by the mechanism in the QoS >>NSLP and QSPEC documents. But I think you need to at least bring up the >>security issues the model and the new parameters introduce. >> >>Please review my comments and revise the document as you find >>appropriate. If you find me in error or have other suggestions please >>tell me and the WG. >> >>Cheers >> >>Magnus Westerlund >> >>IETF Transport Area Director >>---------------------------------------------------------------------- >>Multimedia Technologies, Ericsson Research EAB/TVM >>---------------------------------------------------------------------- >>Ericsson AB | Phone +46 10 7148287 >>Fdrvgatan 6 | Mobile +46 73 0949079 >>SE-164 80 Stockholm, Sweden| mailto: magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com >>---------------------------------------------------------------------- > >
- [NSIS] AD review of draft-ietf-nsis-y1541-qosm-07 Magnus Westerlund
- Re: [NSIS] AD review of draft-ietf-nsis-y1541-qos… Al Morton
- Re: [NSIS] AD review of draft-ietf-nsis-y1541-qos… Gerald Ash
- [NSIS] Dual Token Bucket Requirements -- Re: AD r… Gerald Ash
- [NSIS] Fwd: Re: AD review of draft-ietf-nsis-y154… Al Morton