Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-qos-nslp-16
Jukka Manner <jukka.manner@tkk.fi> Wed, 07 October 2009 20:55 UTC
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Subject: Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-qos-nslp-16
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Hi Roland, thanks for the note, we'll fix this one, too. Jukka Roland Bless wrote: > Hi, > > Magnus Westerlund wrote: > >> G. Section 5.1.2.2: >> "A QUERY message >> MAY contain a second QSPEC object." >> QUERY = COMMON_HEADER >> [ RII ][ *BOUND_SESSION_ID ] >> [ PACKET_CLASSIFIER ] [ INFO_SPEC ] QSPEC >> >> The BNF seem to not allow for a second QSPEC object. > > Good catch. I guess that this is a remnant from an earlier > approach. > > Our student Matthias Dettling actually found further inconsistencies > related to QSPEC presence in QUERYs. > > Section 5.1.2.2 states: > QUERY messages MUST always include a QSPEC. > > Section 4.3 states: > To make a receiver-initiated reservation, the QNR constructs a QUERY > message, which may contain a QSPEC object from its chosen QoS model > (see Figure 8). > > So _may_ is not appropriate here since it MUST contain a QSPEC. > > Furthermore in section 5.4.2 is written: > If the QUERY > contained a QSPEC, it MUST be passed to the RMF where it may be > modified by the QoS Model specific QUERY processing. > > The "if" is clearly wrong since a QSPEC MUST be included and > I guess that the sentence is a duplicate of the earlier statement in the > third paragraph of this section: > When a QNE receives a QUERY message the QSPEC is passed to the RMF > for processing. > > Regards, > Roland > -- Jukka MJ Manner, Professor, PhD. Phone: +358+(0)9+451 2481 Helsinki University of Technology Mobile: +358+(0)50+5112973 Department of Communications Fax: +358+(0)9+451 2474 and Networking (Comnet) Office: G320 (Otakaari 5A) P.O. Box 3000, FIN-02015 TKK E-mail: jukka.manner@tkk.fi Finland WWW: www.comnet.tkk.fi
- [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-qos-… Magnus Westerlund
- Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-… Roland Bless
- Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-… Jukka Manner
- Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-… Jukka Manner
- Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-… Georgios Karagiannis
- Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-… Roland Bless
- Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-… Roland Bless
- Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-… Jukka MJ Manner
- Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-… Magnus Westerlund
- Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-… Jukka Manner
- Re: [NSIS] AD review comments of draft-ietf-nsis-… Magnus Westerlund