Re: [nvo3] Working Group Last Call and IPR Poll for draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-07

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Sun, 06 August 2023 22:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: [nvo3] Working Group Last Call and IPR Poll for draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-07
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Hi Xiao Min,
thank you for your suggestions. I've updated the draft to address your
concern. Please let me know if you agree with the changes highlighted in
the attached diff (the working version also includes updates that address
the editorial updates suggested by Donald Eastlake).

Regards,
Greg

On Tue, Jul 4, 2023 at 1:12 AM <xiao.min2@zte.com.cn> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
>
> I support progressing this document to publication.
>
> At the same time, I strongly suggest the authors to rethink about the
> scope of this document.
>
> This document introduces two cases of using active OAM protocols for
> Geneve, the first case is to use the Management VNI, and the second case is
> to use the VNIs really deployed in the NVE, that's fine to me. However,
> it's said that the OAM encapsulation defined in Section 2.2 can be used for
> both cases, I don't think so. As specified in draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve,
> in order to use the VNIs really deployed, VAP based OAM solution is
> necessary, i.e., the MAC/IP address of VAP must be used as long as it's
> available, and then the VNI can be identified through VAP-to-VNI mapping.
> Besides, for the second case, both Ethernet over Geneve encap and IP over
> Geneve encap are needed. So with that said, the OAM encap defined in
> Section 2.2 can be slightly tweaked to be applicable to the first case
> only, and the OAM encap for the second case can be made outside the scope
> of this document.
>
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Xiao Min
> Original
> *From: *SamAldrin <aldrin.ietf@gmail.com>
> *To: *NVO3 <nvo3@ietf.org>;nvo3-chairs@ietf.org <nvo3-chairs@ietf.org>;
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> *Date: *2023年06月28日 14:27
> *Subject: **[nvo3] Working Group Last Call and IPR Poll for
> draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-07*
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