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Re: [nvo3] WG last call for draft-ietf-nvo3-mcast-framework-01

Nicolas Bouliane <nbouliane@jive.com> Tue, 02 February 2016 02:43 UTC

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Subject: Re: [nvo3] WG last call for draft-ietf-nvo3-mcast-framework-01
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First of all, I support the draft to be published as RFC.

Here are some comments for the improvement.

General:

In section 3.4. IP multicast in the underlay

  - The NVE only supports the basic IGMP/MLD snooping function, let
     the TSs routers handling the application specific multicast. This
     scheme doesn't utilize the underlay IP multicast protocols.
  -
  - The NVE can act as a pseudo multicast router for the directly
     attached VMs and support proper mapping of IGMP/MLD's messages to
     the messages needed by the underlay IP multicast protocols.

Is there an unnecessary dash '-' between the two sentence ?


In section 5.1. Multicast-agnostic NVEs

   [...]in the multicast stream to send back IGMP/MLD reports. In order for
   MSN get the updated multicast group information, the MSN can also

Suggested text as follow:

   [...]in the multicast stream to send back IGMP/MLD reports. In order for
   MSN to get the updated multicast group information, the MSN can also



Cheers,
Nicolas

On Fri, Jan 22, 2016 at 7:15 AM, Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)
<matthew.bocci@nokia.com> wrote:
> WG
>
> I am going to let this last call run for a couple more weeks as I have not
> seen any comments.
>
> The new closing date is Friday 5th Feb 2016.
>
> Regards
>
> Matthew
>
> From: Dacheng Zhang <nvo3-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Matthew Bocci
> <matthew.bocci@alcatel-lucent.com>
> Date: Tuesday, 5 January 2016 at 10:40
> To: NVO3 <nvo3@ietf.org>
> Cc: "draft-ietf-nvo3-mcast-framework@tools.ietf.org"
> <draft-ietf-nvo3-mcast-framework@tools.ietf.org>
> Subject: [nvo3] WG last call for draft-ietf-nvo3-mcast-framework-01
>
> This email begins a two week working group last call for
> draft-ietf-nvo3-mcast-framework-01.txt.
>
> Please review the draft and post any comments to the NVO3 working group
> list.
>
> If you have read the latest version of the draft but have no comments and
> believe it is ready for publication as an Informational RFC, please also
> indicate so to the WG email list.
>
> This working group last call will close on Friday 21st January 2016.
>
> Best regards
>
> Matthew and Benson
>
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