Re: [OAUTH-WG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-oauth-rar-04.txt

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From: Francis Pouatcha <fpo@adorsys.de>
To: Torsten Lodderstedt <torsten=40lodderstedt.net@dmarc.ietf.org>, oauth <oauth@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-oauth-rar-04.txt
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Find bellow my review of the draft:


  1.  Redactional changes:

2.2.  Authorization Data Types


Interpretation of the value of the "type" parameter, and the object

   elements that the "type" parameter allows => allowed


9.  Metadata

which is an

   JSON array. => which is a JSON array



  1.  Application to existing APIs

reason-1: Current open banking initiatives are built on the of existing Data Standards like ISO20022 (PAIN, CAMT) which are XML's that do not provide direct translation to JSON. Some authorization server's might even be able to parse an ISO PAIN file to display the proper authorization request to the user.

reason-2: In some situation, it might be more privacy preserving to have the authorization request content negotiated between the AS and the RS. In this case the "scope" parameter shall only carry some sort of "grant-id" (known in the Berlin Group spec as consent-id). This will allow the AS to negotiate the data to be displayed directly with the RS.

Any idea how to consider these two edge cases?

Best regards.
/Francis


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From: OAuth <oauth-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Torsten Lodderstedt <torsten=40lodderstedt.net@dmarc.ietf.org>
Sent: Sunday, February 7, 2021 12:49 PM
To: oauth <oauth@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-oauth-rar-04.txt

Hi all,

here is the list of changes in revision -04:


  *   restructured draft for better readability
  *   simplified normative text about use of the resource parameter with authorization_details
  *   added implementation considerations for deployments and products
  *   added type union language from GNAP
  *   added recommendation to use PAR to cope with large requests and for request protection

Your feedback is highly appreciated.

best regards,
Torsten.

Am 07.02.2021 um 13:42 schrieb internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>:


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Web Authorization Protocol WG of the IETF.

       Title           : OAuth 2.0 Rich Authorization Requests
       Authors         : Torsten Lodderstedt
                         Justin Richer
                         Brian Campbell
Filename        : draft-ietf-oauth-rar-04.txt
Pages           : 36
Date            : 2021-02-07

Abstract:
  This document specifies a new parameter "authorization_details" that
  is used to carry fine grained authorization data in the OAuth
  authorization request.


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