[OAUTH-WG] Authorization Code Grant diagram Improvement OAuth 2.1 draft-ietf-oauth-v2-1

Warren Parad <wparad@rhosys.ch> Thu, 30 July 2020 15:42 UTC

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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] Authorization Code Grant diagram Improvement OAuth 2.1 draft-ietf-oauth-v2-1
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https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-oauth-v2-1-00.html#name-authorization-code-grant

Can we avoid using (1, 2, 3) on the left side of the diagram to describe,
I'm not even sure what they are supposed to represent, not to mention the
RO in the diagram doesn't really provide value (for me) relevant to the
code grant flow. It's confusing to see these numerical identifiers twice in
the same picture. But maybe there is something hidden in this that I'm
missing, still 3a and 3b could be used to identify different legs of the
same code path.
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