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Re: [OAUTH-WG] Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-10

Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com> Sun, 22 July 2018 21:13 UTC

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From: Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com>
Date: Sun, 22 Jul 2018 15:13:25 -0600
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-10
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In (1), could it maybe say "normative extensions" rather than "normative
changes"?

Also Ping Identity is two words (rather than "PingIdentity").

Otherwise, it looks great. Thanks Rifaat!

On Sat, Jul 21, 2018 at 3:25 PM, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef <rifaat.ietf@gmail.com>
wrote:

> All,
>
> The following is the shepherd write-up for the draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-10
> document:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls/shepherdwriteup/
>
> Please, take a look and let us know if you have any comments.
>
> Regards,
>  Rifaat & Hannes
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