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Re: [OAUTH-WG] Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-10

Rifaat Shekh-Yusef <rifaat.ietf@gmail.com> Sun, 22 July 2018 21:53 UTC

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From: Rifaat Shekh-Yusef <rifaat.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 22 Jul 2018 17:53:32 -0400
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-10
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Thanks Brian!

I have just made these two changes to the write-up.

Regards,
 Rifaat


On Sun, Jul 22, 2018 at 5:13 PM Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com>
wrote:

> In (1), could it maybe say "normative extensions" rather than "normative
> changes"?
>
> Also Ping Identity is two words (rather than "PingIdentity").
>
> Otherwise, it looks great. Thanks Rifaat!
>
> On Sat, Jul 21, 2018 at 3:25 PM, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef <rifaat.ietf@gmail.com
> > wrote:
>
>> All,
>>
>> The following is the shepherd write-up for the draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-10
>> document:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls/shepherdwriteup/
>>
>> Please, take a look and let us know if you have any comments.
>>
>> Regards,
>>  Rifaat & Hannes
>>
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