Re: [OAUTH-WG] Call for Feedback on draft-ietf-oauth-iss-auth-resp-00

Overall it looks pretty good to me.
One little nit is that I don't love this text from the end of sec 2.4 that
talks about JARM:

'Note: The "JWT Secured Authorization Response Mode for OAuth 2.0 (JARM)"
[JARM] forbids the use of additional parameters in the authorization
response. Therefore, the iss parameter MUST NOT be used when JARM is used.
However, JARM responses contain an iss claim that provides the same
protection if it is validated as described in Section 2.4.'

JARM doesn't exactly forbid additional parameters but rather just wraps up
all the authorization response parameters as claims in a JWT which is
itself sent as a single form/query/fragment parameter. So really the iss
authorization response parameter of this draft is still sent as a claim of
the JARM JWT. It just happens to be the same as the iss claim value that
JARM is already including.

On Sat, May 1, 2021 at 2:47 PM Rifaat Shekh-Yusef <rifaat.s.ietf@gmail.com>
wrote:

> All,
>
> We have not seen any comments on this document.
> Can you please review the document and provide feedback, or indicate that
> you have reviewed the document and have no concerns.
>
> Regards,
>  Rifaat & Hannes
>
>
> On Thu, Apr 15, 2021 at 3:04 AM Karsten Meyer zu Selhausen <
> karsten.meyerzuselhausen@hackmanit.de> wrote:
>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> the latest version of the security BCP references
>> draft-ietf-oauth-iss-auth-resp-00 as a countermeasures to mix-up attacks.
>>
>> There have not been any concerns with the first WG draft version so far:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-iss-auth-resp/
>>
>> I would like to ask the WG if there are any comments on or concerns with
>> the current draft version.
>>
>> Otherwise I hope we can move forward with the next steps and hopefully
>> finish the draft before/with the security BCP.
>>
>> Best regards,
>> Karsten
>>
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