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Re: [OAUTH-WG] Nit: Language in section 1.1

Eran Hammer-Lahav <eran@hueniverse.com> Wed, 14 September 2011 14:01 UTC

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From: Eran Hammer-Lahav <eran@hueniverse.com>
To: Justin Richer <jricher@mitre.org>, Greg Brail <greg@apigee.com>
Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2011 07:01:18 -0700
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I have no objection, but "much clearer"? :-)

EHL

> -----Original Message-----
> From: oauth-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:oauth-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf
> Of Justin Richer
> Sent: Wednesday, September 14, 2011 6:04 AM
> To: Greg Brail
> Cc: oauth@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Nit: Language in section 1.1
> 
> +1, this wording is much clearer to me, too
> 
>  -- justin
> 
> On Tue, 2011-09-13 at 19:25 -0400, Greg Brail wrote:
> > This part of section 1.1 is confusing to me and I stumble whenever I
> > read it – I see that Brian Eaton suggested looking at it a while back
> > but I don’t think it got changed:
> >
> >
> >
> > “OAuth includes four roles working together to grant and provide
> >
> >    access to protected resources - access restricted resources
> > requiring
> >
> >    authentication:”
> >
> >
> >
> > I would suggest something simpler, such as:
> >
> >
> >
> > “OAuth includes four roles that work together to grant and provide
> > access to protected resources that require authentication.”
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > Gregory Brail   |   Technology   |   Apigee   |   +1-650-937-9302
> >
> >
> >
> >
> 
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