Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6749 (6613)
Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Wed, 23 June 2021 00:01 UTC
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6749 (6613)
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This looks correct to me; could the authors/WG please confirm? Thanks, Ben On Thu, Jun 17, 2021 at 12:04:37PM -0700, RFC Errata System wrote: > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6749, > "The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework". > > -------------------------------------- > You may review the report below and at: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6613 > > -------------------------------------- > Type: Editorial > Reported by: Daniel Barclay <danielbarclay.oss@gmail.com> > > Section: 3.3 > > Original Text > ------------- > The value of the scope parameter is expressed as a list of space-delimited, case-sensitive strings > > Corrected Text > -------------- > The value of the scope parameter is expressed as a space-delimited list of case-sensitive strings > > Notes > ----- > The original/current seems to be a bit confusing. > > The value is not a collection of space-delimited strings (whatever a "space-delimited string" would be), but it a space-delimited (representation of) a collection of strings. > > Instructions: > ------------- > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. > > -------------------------------------- > RFC6749 (draft-ietf-oauth-v2-31) > -------------------------------------- > Title : The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework > Publication Date : October 2012 > Author(s) : D. Hardt, Ed. > Category : PROPOSED STANDARD > Source : Web Authorization Protocol > Area : Security > Stream : IETF > Verifying Party : IESG
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- Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC674… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC674… Justin Richer