[OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8707 (6810)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Wed, 05 January 2022 12:03 UTC

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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8707 (6810)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8707,
"Resource Indicators for OAuth 2.0".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6810

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Jan Goebel <jan@jangoebel.com>

Section: 4

Original Text
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In typical OAuth deployments the authorization sever is in a position
to observe and track a significant amount of user and client behavior.

Corrected Text
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In typical OAuth deployments, the authorization server is in a position
to observe and track a significant amount of user and client behavior.

Notes
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1. typo: sever -> server
2. I think we also need a comma after "In typical OAuth deployments" because it is an introductory phrase, but maybe a native English speaker can confirm.

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RFC8707 (draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-08)
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Title               : Resource Indicators for OAuth 2.0
Publication Date    : February 2020
Author(s)           : B. Campbell, J. Bradley, H. Tschofenig
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Web Authorization Protocol
Area                : Security
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG