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Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8707 (6810)

Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com> Wed, 05 January 2022 17:49 UTC

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From: Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com>
Date: Wed, 05 Jan 2022 10:48:27 -0700
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8707 (6810)
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Seems legit.

On Wed, Jan 5, 2022 at 5:03 AM RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
wrote:

> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8707,
> "Resource Indicators for OAuth 2.0".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6810
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Jan Goebel <jan@jangoebel.com>
>
> Section: 4
>
> Original Text
> -------------
> In typical OAuth deployments the authorization sever is in a position
> to observe and track a significant amount of user and client behavior.
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> In typical OAuth deployments, the authorization server is in a position
> to observe and track a significant amount of user and client behavior.
>
> Notes
> -----
> 1. typo: sever -> server
> 2. I think we also need a comma after "In typical OAuth deployments"
> because it is an introductory phrase, but maybe a native English speaker
> can confirm.
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC8707 (draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-08)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Resource Indicators for OAuth 2.0
> Publication Date    : February 2020
> Author(s)           : B. Campbell, J. Bradley, H. Tschofenig
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Web Authorization Protocol
> Area                : Security
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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