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Re: [OAUTH-WG] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-02: (with COMMENT)

Kristina Yasuda <Kristina.Yasuda@microsoft.com> Thu, 02 June 2022 03:15 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-02: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Lars,
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-03.html addressing your comment regarding inclusivity has been published.
Thank you!
Kristina

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Subject: RE: Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-02: (with COMMENT)

Hi Lars,

Thank you for the review.

We will change "considered invalid" to "not considered valid" when we publish the next draft.

Regarding your reference to the Simplified BSD License, could you please clarify what you meant since https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-02.html does refer to the Revised BSD License? There doesn't seem to be a problem in that regard.

Kindest Regards,
Kristina


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Subject: Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-02: (with COMMENT)

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# GEN AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-02

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Thanks to Robert Sparks for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review (https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fmailarchive.ietf.org%2Farch%2Fmsg%2Fgen-art%2FOUPrqEJ7DNFPcaL9Goc7-7rZy_4&amp;data=05%7C01%7CKristina.Yasuda%40microsoft.com%7C64fed1f9017e4f1899a008da4227c951%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C637895035919361429%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&amp;sdata=yKJ1fMjXH3P%2BuhcAG5HUC83uEtVBx5XJ4ySSlCUHIjA%3D&amp;reserved=0).

## Comments

### Inclusive language

Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see
https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fpart2%2F%23inclusive_language&amp;data=05%7C01%7CKristina.Yasuda%40microsoft.com%7C64fed1f9017e4f1899a008da4227c951%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C637895035919361429%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&amp;sdata=q9ZNJ4lUr79%2FjnlA63CqKdkFdJfmPebIfyY4ULZ2jCk%3D&amp;reserved=0 for background and more
guidance:

 * Term `invalid`; alternatives might be `not valid`, `unenforceable`, `not
   binding`, `inoperative`, `illegitimate`, `incorrect`, `improper`,
   `unacceptable`, `inapplicable`, `revoked`, `rescinded`

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by automated tools (via https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Flarseggert%2Fietf-reviewtool&amp;data=05%7C01%7CKristina.Yasuda%40microsoft.com%7C64fed1f9017e4f1899a008da4227c951%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C637895035919361429%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&amp;sdata=5bjupAILR96hmL6DgiGkx1U3va9iItTixTt28Hd9nno%3D&amp;reserved=0), so there will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you did with these suggestions.

### Boilerplate

Document still refers to the "Simplified BSD License", which was corrected in the TLP on September 21, 2021. It should instead refer to the "Revised BSD License".

## Notes

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