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[OPSAWG] some too late nits in draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang-17

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Wed, 10 October 2018 10:09 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: Ignas Bagdonas <ibagdona@gmail.com>
CC: "opsawg-chairs@ietf.org" <opsawg-chairs@ietf.org>, "opsawg@ietf.org" <opsawg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang@ietf.org>
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Subject: [OPSAWG] some too late nits in draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang-17
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I note that
RFC7050
RFC7335
appear in YANG description clauses but are only Informative References,
not Normative as they should be.

Security Considerations references TLS1.2 RFC5246 where TLS1.3 RFC8446
should now be used

A Note to the RFC Editor perhaps

Tom Petch

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