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Re: [OPSAWG] Kathleen Moriarty's Discuss on draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-04: (with DISCUSS)

"Sehgal, Anuj" <s.anuj@jacobs-university.de> Sun, 01 March 2015 18:16 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] Kathleen Moriarty's Discuss on draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-04: (with DISCUSS)
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Hi Kathleen,

> On 24 Feb 2015, at 3:35 pm, Kathleen Moriarty <Kathleen.Moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
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> Thank you for taking to time to add in the additional text, this hits the points needed and addresses my discuss.  One of the sections has a run-on sentence, so I'll try to help fix that below.  Please let me know when the updates are made and I will clear my discuss.

I have updated the draft and published a new version. Could you please have a look and perhaps clear the discuss? Thanks for your time.

Regards,
Anuj

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