Re: [OPSAWG] [dnsdir] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-12
Jim Reid <jim@rfc1035.com> Wed, 28 February 2024 13:37 UTC
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] [dnsdir] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-12
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> On 28 Feb 2024, at 13:26, Nicolai Leymann via Datatracker via dnsdir <dnsdir@ietf.org> wrote: > > The draft has a clear structure, but needs some "language polishing" (also see > nits below) and there are a few minor issues which should be fixed. Thanks for your detailed review Nic.
- [OPSAWG] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-op… Nicolai Leymann via Datatracker
- Re: [OPSAWG] [dnsdir] Dnsdir last call review of … Jim Reid
- Re: [OPSAWG] Dnsdir last call review of draft-iet… Michael Richardson