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Re: [OPSAWG] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-09

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Mon, 29 November 2021 15:10 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Gyan, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On 2021-10-24, at 3:45, Gyan Mishra via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-??
> Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
> Review Date: 2021-10-23
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-10-27
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> This draft analyzes the overall framework of network telemetry technologies
> that exist today and future evolution of telemetry technology and data
> gathering from a control plane, data plane and management plane perspective.
> Document is well written.
> 
> Major issues:
> None
> 
> Minor issues:
> None
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> Section 4.1.3 Forwarding plane telemetry does not include STAMP RFC 8762.
> Mention traditional non OAM based ping ICMP Echo snd Echo-Reply.
> 
> Also for OAM based maybe list the variety of OAM based ping such as for all
> data planes such as MPLS, RSVP-TE,  L2 VPN pdeudowire OAM ping VCCV (Virtual
> Circuit Connection Verification) RFC 5085 RFC 7189, RFC 5586 GACH PW OAM.
> 
> Any of the RFCs listed here maybe include as informative references.
> 
> Also NVO3 VXLAN and BIER OAM.  SFC service plane RFC 8924 SFC OAM.
> 
> Also DETNET forwarding and service sub planes DETNET OAM.
> 
> SDN and SD-WAN, PCEP, BGP all centralized controller based architecture can
> also be used for network telemetry.
> 
> RESTCONF REST API is missing should be mentioned
> 
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