Re: [OPSAWG] start WGLC ondraft-ietf-opsawg-smi-datatypes-in-xsd-04.txt

"Bert Wijnen \(IETF\)" <bertietf@bwijnen.net> Wed, 04 February 2009 09:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] start WGLC ondraft-ietf-opsawg-smi-datatypes-in-xsd-04.txt
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My comments:

- page 7, section 4
  - speaks about opague. I think you mean opaque (with a Q)

  You may also want to make an explicit statement that those are the datatype
  names as ytou specify them in XSD. I first though they were the datatypes
  as specified in SMIv2.


- Opague (with a G) is again used in the 1st para of sect 5.3 and 
   in the first bullet on page 12 and also 3rd bullet.

I share/support Juergen Shoenwaelder's comment w.r.t. the discussion about 3 documents
in a document set. Where, how is that otehr work scheduled/planned?

Other than that, this document seems fine.

Bert
  ----- Original Message ----- 
  From: Scott O. Bradner 
  To: opsawg@ietf.org 
  Sent: Friday, January 30, 2009 3:10 AM
  Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] start WGLC ondraft-ietf-opsawg-smi-datatypes-in-xsd-04.txt



  back on Nov 6th we sent out a WGLC on 
  draft-ietf-opsawg-smi-datatypes-in-xsd-04.txt

  there was no response to that last call that I can 
  find in the mail list archive (or in my memory)

  we gotta see a bit more interest than that to proceed
  with this document.  

  So, I'll try again 

  this is a WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-smi-datatypes-in-xsd-04.txt
  please comment (one way or the other) by Feb 12

  tnx

  Scott
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